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webmestre
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Site review please - 2/26/2003 20:36:52
Hello everybody.
I have developed this website for my first client and I hope it looks professionnal.
Please I would welcome all comments and critics and I thank all of you in advance for your help. It will be really appreciated.
Thank you again
Site: www.pragmathic.com
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Gil
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RE: Site review please - 2/26/2003 21:06:39
I was in a hurry, so just looked at the first page - I can' t read any of the text, the backgraound is too distracting.
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swoosh
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RE: Site review please - 2/26/2003 21:13:55
Hello webmestre, welcome to Outfront
Your site is really nice. Seems like a fresh design in my eyes. A few things I could comment on are the following and are only my opinions.
1. On the main page, in the upper right hand corner where the logo and the moving circle image is fine, but I was very distracted with the animated e-mail envelope moving in and out. Just seemed to be too many things moving up there and it distracted me. Maybe just have the envelope stationery in its place.
2. Also on the main page, right below the top graphic, there seems to be a lot of blank space before your information starts. The content could be moved up further to fill in that space.
Site was very easy to navigate with your links at the top and bottom of the pages. Nice Job!
< Message edited by swoosh -- 2/26/2003 9:16 PM >
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preludeok95
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RE: Site review please - 2/26/2003 22:22:29
Interesting background, I think it is the combo platter of text blocks over the back ground in the outer columns, but the center columns is a mix of both effects that makes it distracting..
Try combiing the text and images in the center and overlay the background, maybe?
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Shirley
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RE: Site review please - 2/26/2003 23:39:13
There is too much going on for me. Spinning O, moving envelope, text changing colors and different bg for the headers. My eyes did not know where to go.
I do like the colors and layout. You have an excellent start. I would just like to see it toned down a little.
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stevec
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RE: Site review please - 2/27/2003 4:03:16
I agree with the too much movement. Took me a while to figure out what to look at. I' d drop the envelope and the fading " Consulting Services" text. The bouncing arrow on the sub pages is overkill too I think.
In all, I like it but think it' s a bit busy.
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webmestre
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RE: Site review please - 2/28/2003 23:29:56
To all of you,
Thank you very much, I will improve the site based on your comments.
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RE: Site review please - 2/28/2003 23:33:46
Linda,
I like very much your suggestion. Thanks a lot, this is very generous of you to have spent your time on this.
Gaétan
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