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LB -> RE: AdWords at Google (3/21/2003 11:34:37)
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Hopefully this will have a positive effect. Good luck, Brian! Hopefully it will. [:)] Summer - Try to take an objective look at each page and then compare them to others who are advertising. See which ones you might genuinely be drawn to buying from and ask others for opinions. I would think that many Google users would click on at least two or three of the ads and choose between what they find. To take the protein bars as an example.... Your ad is to the point and informational.... good for drawing them in, but a part of this is also trying to draw your *target* audience. Your site is nice, but speaks to a certain audience... and it' s not the athlete, weightlifter, or businessman. If you change the wording on the ad, you may get fewer of those not likely to buy from you and more who are (if you want a broader audience, you may need to consider a different look for the site). On the protein bars, the photo and info on the pdf are very good. You might use some of this on the order page. Entice the customer into wanting to buy! Also give them all the info they may want *right there*. It says 12 grams protein, but doesn' t mention the carbs or ingredients and the flavors aren' t shown unless someone uses the dropdown menu to see them. You have a script installed for product reviews, but there aren' t any! If you' re advertising a particular product, be sure to have reviews there for it. I think you had this in Site Critiques at one time? Keep in mind that a general look at a site is much different than specific page/promotional critique. With one page like this to look at, it' s easier to get more specifiic about what might be missing or might help better promote an item. [;)] Linda note: http://lovelosing.com/store/Scripts/prodView.asp?idproduct=28 pdf link is broken
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