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Paul N Push
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Site check, can it be improved? - 5/12/2003 6:00:48
Hello, if you get the time please take a look at my site and let me know if or how it can be improved?
Could you also let me know if its easy to understand what to do on the splash page?
www.paulnpush.com
Thanks in advance Paul.
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_gail
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RE: Site check, can it be improved? - 5/12/2003 19:13:05
Paul,
I find the design of your site intriguing, and I like it a lot. You do great work!
It' s tough to figure out on the first page where to click to enter the site. You need to do something about it. I have mixed emotions about the bottom links on pages; it is not readily apparent that they are links. I think they are attractive enough but there is something about them that bother me that I can' t put my finger on right now.
I really hope you don' t mind this suggestion. I find your copy a bit too " me," " my," and " I" centered. That type of copy is expected on an " about" page, but not on every page I click. If you know someone who has some writing for the web or business writing skills, maybe they could take a look and offer some suggestions.
gail
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Cyprus
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RE: Site check, can it be improved? - 5/12/2003 20:49:23
The front page was also confusing for me. You should probably move some of the text up a little more and have the 800 x 600 and the 1024 x 768 a different color from the rest of the text. Something that makes it look like it' s a link. Because when I first got that page I tried clickin the illustration, cartoons, etc.. links first. I think if you were to change the colors for the resolution links and maybe put 800 x 600 on left side of the page, and then the 1024 x 768 on the right it would look pretty good, and a lot easier to understand.
Also, when I first tried your website today I didn' t realize you could click on the numbers and it' d show pictures for instance. I just went to the website clicked on illustratoins, cartoons, etc.. and it brought up some content about it. So I would definently put the numbers in a different more noticable spot maybe. Other than that, I love some of the cartoon characters. How much would you charge to do a character like that for a website?
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Paul N Push
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RE: Site check, can it be improved? - 5/13/2003 8:07:59
Thank' s to you all for passing comments on my web site.
It certainly looks like I have to do something about my splash page, I' ll have to try and make it easier to understand, same goes' for the links once your actually in the site.
Cyprus, the cartoons and Illustrations that I create are reasonably priced. I' ll be happy to send you a quote, if you send some details of what you may want.
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