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topnoch -> Please critique! (3/1/2001 23:55:00)

Hi,
I have created this website for my business with barely any frontpage knowledge. I would appreciate some honest (good, bad, or indifferent) oppinions of my work. If you have any suggestions on how to make it better I would really appreciate it.
Thanks
www.tobacorp.com

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Andy from Spain -> RE: Please critique! (3/1/2001 13:26:00)

Hi Topnoch,

Site's looking good but a couple of things I'd pick up on.

There's no navigation on the inside pages - it's a hassle to click back to the home page to get to another - a simple menu at the top would do fine.

Wouldn't it be better to have customers fill in a form rather than have to write an email if they're interested in the product or maybe have the credit card option available under each phone.

Your title and bar below it would look better centred - I'm looking at a resolution of 1024 and it looks a bit misaligned.

The moving brandnames gets a bit annoying after a while.

Anyway - best of luck with it.

Cheers
Andy

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Willis1 -> RE: Please critique! (3/1/2001 15:47:00)

I would tidy up your main graphic on the home page by saving it as a gif. Jpg compression on text comes out looking very amateur in my opinion.




Goober -> RE: Please critique! (3/1/2001 17:04:00)

The points made earlier were very good.

A note about graphics...save .jpg for photos and graphics with lots of gradient value.

The secondary pages have some side-to-side scrolling and the Nokia page especially, is wayyyyy to large in file size. I would suggest breaking the page down into at least two...maybe phones for one and accessories for another? Also, double check that the graphics have been saved in the correct format and have been compressed. The animated .gifs add quite a bit to file size, too.

You need to give each page a descriptive title. Don't forget keyword and description meta tags. You also need alternative text for all your graphics.


Best wishes,
Sandy

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