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MysticNight

 

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Take a looksie if ya don't mind - 4/9/2001 21:52:00   
http://www.angelfire.com/tx4/vettechclub/

What do ya guys think? Sorry, 'bout the splash page, but they want it. Might coax them out of it though eventually. Anywho...

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MysticNight

 

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RE: Take a looksie if ya don't mind - 4/10/2001 15:42:00   
I think you did a great job! Maybe lose some of the gifs, but other than that it looks wonderful. The background might need to be lightened a little bit more also. That's such a cute little doggie.

Keep up the good work!

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Shirley

 

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RE: Take a looksie if ya don't mind - 4/10/2001 18:02:00   
LOL See you don't even need us!

The background is too distracting for me. I prefer not to see a bazillion dogs but thats just my opinion.

I would put some navigation on all of the pages so you don't have to keep going back to the menu page.


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RE: Take a looksie if ya don't mind - 4/10/2001 20:03:00   
The background is too busy on which to read text.

Your graphics are sending a different message than your text. The text is fairly serious the the animated graphics are childish and unprofessional. You need to decide in what direction you wish to go.

You basically have two splash pages, the second one containing only navigation, and virtually no navigation on the other pages.

You have a serious lack of content. Your client needs to get you more material or you need to condense onto fewer pages, in my opinion.


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LadyG

 

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RE: Take a looksie if ya don't mind - 4/11/2001 20:43:00   
I hate BACK buttons. They are confusing and yours are at the bottom of the page......
Navigation must be smooth and flowing .
When I teach my students HTML design (at the college level) I insist they use a flow chart to map out their web. This decreases the chances of poorly designed sites.

I agree that your background is distracting and takes away from your project. Your links should be buttons, not simple text.

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