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_gail -> RE: Fresh eyes please (9/22/2003 9:23:17)
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Much of the text is very small but I like the overall layout. The logo is really nifty, simple and effective. However, the red text under the logo is a bit hard to read, in part because of the font size and because of the subtle gray lines in the background, which I like.
A few other thoughts.
I think you use too much red which I find visually distracting. Red is a real attention-getter color but you don't want a visitors attention to be scattered, imho. Maybe the listings of all the mobile phones on right right can be made black. Keep the border red though.
I'm not sure about the scrolling ads, think I'd prefer to see them simply change from one to another. I know the scrolling stops when you put your mouse cursor over the ad, but sometimes when it stops you get half each of two ads. It feels like I'm playing an online game and that's not what I want to do when I'm shopping for a mobile phone.
I'd put a soft return so your phone # is on it's own line. I'm assuming it's a toll free # and, if so, you may wish to point that out.
gail
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