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Guest -> I build and I built it (4/22/2001 21:25:00)

Please have a look.
www.kpconst.com
Thanks for the feedback in advance.



turboguy -> RE: I build and I built it (4/24/2001 20:13:00)

First I think you have a very nice site. The comments that I can make are things that I like in some ways and don't in others. For example the backgroud blueprint gives it a classy look and makes it interesting, but it also makes the text a little hard to read. You have a lot of movement on your site. It has a lively intersting feel and you really have some great graphics. Some people may find it a little distracting with all the movement. I don't really know if i think it is "too much". I would not add any more, and you might want to tone it down just a touch, and maybe not. Rock and roll is here to spray is catchy, but I could not quite understand what it meant except it was painted on the truck.
My only other comments would be that you need meta tags. You have a title, but no description or keywords. You did a great job on the site.



mkelley -> RE: I build and I built it (4/24/2001 23:32:00)

I like the design, but I wouldn't have used the Comic Sans font, non-Windows PCs would not see it as intended. Your use or Arial and Helvetica are good standards, they show up well in Mozilla under Mac & Linux. I would only change the font face in the middle to Arial and use bold to make it stand out. Good Job.

Thanks,
Mike Kelley
www.mkelley.net



Goober -> RE: I build and I built it (4/24/2001 19:55:00)

I remember seeing this site before.

The comments mentioned above are good. The background is distracting. Sorry.

I would also recommend getting rid of the borders around the thumbnail pics.

You really need to go through and be sure all your pages have proper titles, not new page...I noticed this on the Twin Home page.

A fine-tuning suggestion would be to coordinate your graphics a little better. It is best to stick with one style or color theme.

Good luck with it.
Sandy

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www.alleghenyweb.com

[This message has been edited by Goober (edited 04-24-2001).]




Guest -> RE: I build and I built it (4/28/2001 20:51:00)

Thanks for the input. I revamped and I think the site is easier to look at. Great suggestions, keep em comin.

Kevin




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