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constructive criticism - 4/28/2001 20:32:00   
http://dalebartlettpga.com

Please ignore the banner Ad and the scroll in the status bar... What they want is what they get! (hopefully I will be able to convince them that everyone hates the ads and the scrolling!)
Thanks in advance for any help given!
Signed... Robert

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RE: constructive criticism - 4/28/2001 20:25:00   
Hi Robert,

Good to see you back.

Site looks good - couple of things I would change, mainly the main photo, it's a nice one but took an age to appear - could you play around with the optimisation a bit more and get the size down? A personal thing but I would specify a font - the text looks a bit untidy with my default. Finally I'd put the same menu items throughout the site and add text links at the bottom.

Best of luck with it.

Cheers
Andy

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RE: constructive criticism - 4/28/2001 20:48:00   
Hey Robert.

This is the best site you've done, by far.

I would recommend using a different font on the buttons as it is kind of hard to read...or maybe it's the background on the buttons. How about making them a solid color, using one of the colors from the page background?

It would also be best to use the same style on all the photos. I suggest not using borders or bevels, but perhaps a little drop shadow, if anything.

The pictures are nice, but, in my opinion, I would make them smaller and add more written content. Content is quite lacking.

I would also lose the horizontal bars. They don't really add anything in most cases. If you feel like you absolutely need them, maybe try a single pixel high line, again, in one of the colors from the background.

Good luck with it.

Sandy

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RE: constructive criticism - 4/28/2001 16:19:00   
Thank both of you for your help and suggestions... Your porfessional perspectives mean a great deal!
I'm sure that I can make the changes that you suggest with out out any hassle!
Ok,Bye for now,Signed...Your unmet friend

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RE: constructive criticism - 5/2/2001 23:04:00   
OK, I've made some of the changes that you had suggested,(I think?). But I haven't optimized the photos yet,(I'm going to have to take some new photos).Just now I'm trying to see where the graphics will fit!
Could you review the changes please?
Thanks once again for the valuable help.
Signed, Robert...

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RE: constructive criticism - 5/3/2001 23:42:00   
Looking good.

The button graphics may work better saved as gifs than jpgs.

The text links seem out of place at the bottom in the left cell -- it's just my opinion, but I'd like to see them across the bottom of the right side cell instead of "back to top".

Linda

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RE: constructive criticism - 5/4/2001 20:40:00   
Thank You! very much Linda!!Your help to make my work appear to have a "Pro" touch means a great deal to me.I realize that what I am doing is at about the Hi-School level.All of the things that you folks suggest become very clear when you point them out. More or less Obvious!The help that I receive here gives me the confidence to make positive changes! With out me worring if I doing the right thing.
I cannot express enough, the regret that I have, for causing the squabbling in the past. I thank you all for responding to my need for help in a forgiving and understanding manner...
Your unmet friend... Robert

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