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bobby

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Give it to me straight Dr. I can take it... - 5/10/2001 14:15:00

I recently read a book on graphic design and the use of "white space"

This latest revision to my web stems from that.

Any comments or criticizm welcome...

http://www.bdwebservices.com

Thanks,
Bobby

Andy from Spain

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RE: Give it to me straight Dr. I can take it... - 5/10/2001 17:04:00

Hi Bobby,

White space is great - makes a site look smart but in my personal opinion you need a bit more content. I think a paragraph on each page isn't convincing enough to would-be clients.

I'd also lose the blue borders around the graphic links on your graphic design page.

Best of luck with it.

Cheers
Andy

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bobby

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RE: Give it to me straight Dr. I can take it... - 5/10/2001 21:12:00

Thanks Andy -

That change has been made, just haven't updated yet.

Content is the next piece of the puzzle.

Bobby

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RE: Give it to me straight Dr. I can take it... - 5/13/2001 23:33:00

Hi, Bobby -

I'd suggest changing your email to something other than bigcheese... make me think of Blue Mouse instead of Blue Dragon.

You don't have your background for the page specified, but you have some blue text... you should either set all the background properties or not use a specified font color.

Looking good... good luck on getting the content filled in. Sometimes that comes easy, and other times it can be the hardest part!

Linda

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