RE: The Unveiling - 6/1/2001 20:42:00
Looks good - it's always nice to see a product being used to its best.On the chief page some of the graphics don't line up with their caption. Also on the history page your text is broken up by the nbsp - stronlgy suggest you get rid of those unecessary spaces. Gil is absolutely right about the logos they do nothing for the page and (in general) are a sure sign of an amateur. As you've got such a professional looking site it's a great pity to detract from that impression even slightly. Consider putting in an "About" page and sticking them there. The counter on your home page - generally I'm against 'em but for such a site they are appropriate. However be aware that that counter simply lists the number of times that it is 'hit' *not* visitors. I went back to your home page twice and generated two extra "visits" that way. You'll need to analyse your server statistics to get a true idea of your actual number of visitors and what they looked at. I presume that you plan on promoting the site. There's a series of excellent points made by the moderators of this forum in recent postings. You might like to check those out. A good web site to start learning about promoting a site is: http://www.selfpromotion.com Here's a direct link to another excellent resource: http://www.htmlgoodies.com/beyond/register.html (That page links to a superb metatags tutorial also - I urge you check that one out.) Finally on a lighter note (what with me being an Irish/Danish gorilla and all ) I hereby serve you fair warning that I plan on challenging your chief to single combat the weapons are to be a caber (him) and a giant banana (me.) If he wins (impossible) I'll go away. I if I win your clan must pay me a tribute of all the bananas and chocolate I can eat.  ------------------ Hope this helps :-) Gorilla aka Mark Saunders http://www.computerdriving.com marksaunders@techie.com
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