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Peppergal -> RE: Site critique for mobilesdot.co.uk (10/26/2003 19:48:51)
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I think the page is cram packed...with too much information...as a visitor I have no idea where to look or click first...
I also think there are too many different colors...the yellow letters for the logo, the green background also adds more "noise" with it's "texture" and the red and orange...just too many colors, too many links, too many words.
I would suggest paring it down so that you don't overwhelm your visitors. Divide your navigation up a little so that the main links are on your home page, and then on each of the other pages, there will be more navigation, that makes sense and is pertinent to that particular page.
Think of your website home page as an outline of the site as a whole...have enough information on there to get your keywords in the body of your text, and to make sure your visitors know what your site is about. then on your following pages, expand and give more information.
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