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zaphod
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Site critique for mobilesdot.co.uk - 10/22/2003 19:44:32
Hi,
any feedback appreciated.
regards
Zaphod
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hvoice
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RE: Site critique for mobilesdot.co.uk - 10/26/2003 15:41:59
Hello,
Sorry to say the site is a mess,
I do not like the green, in my opinion it is to green looks like puke,
the red does not fit with the site at all, it adds more confusion. I suggest making a dark background with the white table in the center, and try to cut down on some of the phone links, a drop down box would be perfect!
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Peppergal
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RE: Site critique for mobilesdot.co.uk - 10/26/2003 19:48:51
I think the page is cram packed...with too much information...as a visitor I have no idea where to look or click first...
I also think there are too many different colors...the yellow letters for the logo, the green background also adds more "noise" with it's "texture" and the red and orange...just too many colors, too many links, too many words.
I would suggest paring it down so that you don't overwhelm your visitors. Divide your navigation up a little so that the main links are on your home page, and then on each of the other pages, there will be more navigation, that makes sense and is pertinent to that particular page.
Think of your website home page as an outline of the site as a whole...have enough information on there to get your keywords in the body of your text, and to make sure your visitors know what your site is about. then on your following pages, expand and give more information.
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nickc
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RE: Site critique for mobilesdot.co.uk - 11/12/2003 7:31:55
Loads nice and fast on my modem. The background is a bit overpowering. The page is too wide for 800x600. Visitors without Flash can't navigate the site using the top menu - perhaps the text menu at the bottom should be in the same order as the top one. Nice design though. Good luck with it.
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