RE: Site Critque - 6/19/2001 20:34:00
Hi Steph,No wonder you're excited  I had a look at your site using opera (so now you know it works under opera too ) There are a couple of things: Definitely I'd get rid of the counter - any counter with low numbers won't inspire confidence in a visitor looking for a professional service "only 300 visitors - I'll look elsewhere ..." I think I'd get rid of the guest book too - why not have a testimonials page instead? That way you: 1 keep your visitors on *your* site. 2 Give a much better impression of professional service. A major niggle: - call the link to your home page "home" - visitors expect it, so it's best not to confuse 'em. Emphasise your contact info much more - bigger font - maybe at the top of the page? (Don't forget to put your site address on your business cards, flyers, invoices, etc.) Last point - I liked your site - it works well going through it I got a real impression of someone who loved her work and was justifiably proud of her art and of her achievements. If you can find the time - instead saying things like "Stephanie is .... could you put it all it the first person "Stephanie Hellmann has been selling her photography for many years. She has won numerous local awards and her work can be seen in restaurants and shops around town." to "I've won numerous awards and you can see my work in shops and restaurants all over towm. I've been selling my art/photos/work for many years .... " Sorry this was long - hope it helps 'though.
------------------ Hope this helps :-) Gorilla aka Mark Saunders http://www.computerdriving.com Email Address: marksaunders@techie.com ======= "Gotcha!" Cackled Pooh as he assimilated the Borg.
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