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Goober

 

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Critique Please - 6/21/2001 21:44:00   
Critique, suggestions, and comments would be most welcome!

http://www.littlepumpkincompany.com/

Thank you!
Sandy

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RE: Critique Please - 6/22/2001 20:32:00   
Hi, Sandy -

What a great product! I came across a site for baby blankets last week and was thinking of how neat some blankies made of silk & flannel would be and was entertaining the idea of having my sis-in-law make some for us to sell online. (I have at least one idea like this per month... I'm sure you know how that is) I will bet these satin & flannel blankets will be a huge hit for your client.

I love the site as is, but here's my suggestions...

- Link the phrases in the top right corner to pages or pop-ups.

- Name & slogan: Little Pumpkin Company ...because babies love satin! This doesn't seem to fit very well. If they're open to ideas, how about something like a baby next to a pumpkin (instead of the ribbon on the pumpkin), and the slogan ...your little pumpkin will love this blanket! or ...a very special blanket for your little pumpkin! Just something to try to tie in the baby/pumpkin thing a bit more.

- FAQ > contact. Should add a link to the contact page for further info. IMHO, your client should have a phone number listed. It's understandable if she doesn't want to use her home #, but voicemail through her phone company should only be a couple dollars a month... I don't know what's standard, but ours has a separate phone number assigned to it.

This looks very nice.

Linda


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gorilla

 

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RE: Critique Please - 6/22/2001 20:10:00   
Lovely site lovely product too! - Linda has pretty well said everything I'd thought of. Just one suggestion - some testimonials? maybe even a testimonials page?

Mark


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Andy from Spain

 

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RE: Critique Please - 6/22/2001 20:23:00   
Hi Sandy,

Very smart - captures the product really well.

Cheers
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RE: Critique Please - 6/22/2001 20:02:00   
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