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DarlingBri -> RE: How can I improve my conversion rate? (11/6/2003 11:18:46)
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Err. OK, a bunch of feedback, which is obviously my personal reaction to your site. 1) I'm a woman, and from the dippy floral background, I'm going to guess your site is aimed at me. Uh, no thank you. Really. I want a professional shopping experience, not a "pretty" one and sites like that annoy me. "Oh, you're a girl, here's the girl look." 2) You're wasting text. "Why fight traffic? Why waste time away from your salon? Let the Post Office deliver to your doorstep. They visit your shop or home every day anyway, don't they? Public Welcome! We never close! - Shop when you're not busy and at your own leisurely pace!! Take all the time you want to find the products you need." Yeah, thanks, I'm already online and at a shopping site, I've already figured that bit out. The information that you have over 3,000 products is far more interesting to me, and should be at the top. 3) Over all, the site looks home-made and not professional, aside from the background image problem. I'm giving you money, I want you to look reputable. Really, I would suggest you start over with shopping cart software that runs the whole site; you know about databases, that much is clear, so you could do a homepage with a representative product image for each section, and a random database pull for a featured item or side menu for new products. Honestly, go look at sites people do shop at and see how they present the shopping experience, image and interface to the user. 4) The fact that you are running banner ads on your main page for other sites doesn't work for me. They also don't appear to be affilate-coded links, so why are you sending free traffic to other sites? If you want links, do a Links or Other Products page. And umm, hooked on phonics? 5) Finally, since you seem cool with the database queries, I'd like to see a brand drop-down on the home page for Quick Product Links. It could just match against the product title field or whatever, but that would be useful if it was alphabetical. Much easier. Also, a text search on the home page would make my shopping experience a lot faster. I think you have good products and can go somewhere with this site, but the presentation is just not working for me at all.
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