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smcfarland

 

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Need critique asap - 7/8/2001 21:15:00   
I have to have this site approved by an insurance company this week... could I please get your opinions? BE HARSH!! Thanks!

http://ltciagents.com

(I am not at all good at this design thing and this is one of my first attempts)

burnspot

 

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RE: Need critique asap - 7/9/2001 20:28:00   
Dunno just how much of this website your work goes into, but the page you come to off the link you gave here looked great. Perhaps one thing I'd do is label that email link and phone number at the bottom; perhaps the agents know what that information is for, but maybe they don't'. Also, when you click "Agent Login", all that information at the bottom, that I mentioned, plus the copyright information makes a font size shift from small to big. Opening that login page in a new window may be unnecessary too. Otherwise, I think it looks great!

Did you do the consumer part or just the agent part?

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smcfarland

 

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RE: Need critique asap - 7/9/2001 23:51:00   
Thanks! I saw that font change on the footer, but I have no idea how it happened unless it is something to do with the asp code... it is an include. I don't really like the login page opening like that, but that is what the owner wants.

I have done all the sites for that company (I was the office manager but my husband left me when I was preg with our 3rd daughter and the owner didn't want me to choose between work and family, so now, I do the sites full time and actually make more $$) --

The consumer site (http://ltc-usa.com) I am redoing at http://ssahm.com/LTCI and we have another agent site that I am having problems with the rollover images for (http://allianzagents.com).


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Bill Nicol

 

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RE: Need critique asap - 7/9/2001 13:20:00   
Hi,

Dropped in for a quick lookaround. Nice looking site... just a bit sterile, but that's not bad. As usual, I'm partial to simplicity and functionality. And you have both there.

I'm also a big believer in templates, although you may not want to mess with that now.

I didn't look at any code or such, but would suggest an include module for that info in the middle, instead of that verbiage which drops down. That way, you can always add new "notices" or "news" without a lot of fuss. And you never know how other browsers are going to react to that animated stuff.

I agree also, with the comments from Scott.

All in all, a good looking site.

Hope Gorilla takes a look too.. ... his replies to other posts the past few days have kept me in stitches.... Wonder what's in those bananas he's been eating.

Hang in there....

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Goober

 

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RE: Need critique asap - 7/9/2001 20:28:00   
Hi.

Overall the site is pretty nice. I do think there are some things you can do to make it better, though.

First, I would suggest coming up with a logo and possibly use a business or long term care-type photo for some eye appeal.

The nav bar bothers me. I think it's because you have four different link styles there. It looks a little helter-skelter to me.

I see you got rid of the falling red words. That was a good move.

Check and double check grammar throughout the site; and font size, and consistency in format, particularly on this page: http://ltciagents.com/SeniorLinc_Features.htm

You should also add Keyword and Description meta tags.

Best wishes,
Sandy

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Bill Nicol

 

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RE: Need critique asap - 7/10/2001 20:15:00   
Hi,

Just wanted to point out a couple of words: "Cueing", I believe, should be "queueing" or "queuing", both of which are acceptable. "Cueing" might hurt.

And I believe "ambuation" should be "ambulation".

Minor stuff, I know, but can make a difference with some people.


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