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Paula

 

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Please take a look - 8/5/2001 15:33:00   
I'm doing this page for this guy for the experience and I've never done a frames page before. He really wanted this look and I don't know how to do SSI. It looks good on my machine but he's not getting the same thing (I think) on his MAC. Does anyone see overlapping pictures or is the left hand frame background small in the frame or does it tile? Any help would be appreciated, (specially if you use a MAC).

www.gamutadvertising.com

Thanks in advance,
Paula

Gil

 

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RE: Please take a look - 8/5/2001 16:34:00   
I think you forgot something? All I see is:

This page uses frames, but your browser doesn't support them.

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Goober

 

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RE: Please take a look - 8/5/2001 18:28:00   
Paula,

On NN 4.7 at 800x600 resolution, the word "Advertising" in the left frame is starting to fall behind the bottom of the browser. I'm assuming there are two more links below that which are unaccessable?

If he is absolutely set on frames, here's an article you can read to help avoid some of the pitfalls: http://www.useit.com/alertbox/9612.html

I would recommend not using them, personally.

You need page titles.

The page is very slow loading. If I wasn't critiquing, I would have been gone long before the page was up. Some of the graphics seem to be saved in an incorrect format, which could help that some. Photos and graphics with gradients, such as the background on the left frame, should be saved as .jpgs. Everything else, such as some of the logos on one of the pages, should be saved as .gifs.

Be sure you have optimized or compressed all the graphics, even the ones the thumbnails are linked to. You may need to divide some of them onto two or more pages.

All graphics, page titles included, need alt text.

On at least one of the pages, the phrase "graphic design" gets split onto two lines. I would put a non-breaking space there to keep it together.

It looks like he does good work. It should be a fun site to do.

Sandy


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gorilla

 

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RE: Please take a look - 8/6/2001 20:39:00   
In terms of "the look of the thing" it looks restrained and professional - overall I liked it. It gets the message across - well done, so many people faced with such a brief would have gone over the top you created a site with a great look and feel.

*But* I have to echo Sandy about the page being slow to load - just under 45 seconds on a fast connection isn't good - most people will have left by then, me among them.

The graphics are your biggest problem. Slowing it down something wicked - Sandy has addressed that fot you.

You really do *need* to add some non-frames content.

Please please please try to avoid frames for this site a table based layout would be so much better and much easier on you, your client, and most importantly of all your client's visitors.

Good luck with it and have fun - I'm eagerly anticipating seeing more sites from you in future.

BTW yes my own site uses frames (and no I don't like it) but as I'll be upping stakes and moving quite soon I decided it wasn't worth kicking up a fuss with my business partner who's a great admirer of frames and uses them at the drop of a hat.

PS: I looked at it using opera on a PC. Can't help you especially with a MAC except to say that the differences can be quite pronounced. One rule of thumb is that any font will look about three quarters the size on a mac that it will on a PC. It's a question of who your audience will be - if it's mostly PC users then go for that.

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Paula

 

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RE: Please take a look - 8/6/2001 13:34:00   
Gil, Sandy & Gorilla,
Thank you so much for looking at the site and for all the helpful info. I was planning on doing a no frames page I just haven't gotten to it yet, I know it needs to be there, but I was having this problem and really needed help! I'll be working on alt text, page titles and the download time thing. The problem is the owner is an artist and he really wants those pictures to show up great, which they do, and I'm afraid if I try optimizing them they won't look as good. Gorilla, you suggested using a table layout rather than frames, is there some way I can get that stationary left frame effect using tables? He's really sold on that look. You're right it would be so much easier, but I don't know how to get the same look without using frames. I'm having a real problem with graphic navigation bar in that left frame. I can't seem to get a text graphic with a dropshadow to show up on that background with a transparent background. As it is I took a square of the background and put the text graphics on it and made hot spots for the links. The problem is it moves around and doesn't blend with the main background. Also when it resizes in different browsers (as you mentioned Sandy) part of it drops below the browser window. Any ideas of a different way I could do this and still get the same look? Think I'll go to the graphics forum and ask about it there too. Thank you again for all your help!
Paula

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Goober

 

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RE: Please take a look - 8/6/2001 18:32:00   
Your client may have to be told that the Internet has a whole different set of rules than print. Part of our job as web designers is to educate our not-so-knowledgable clients. I have to say, it's my least favorite part.

To have the left side stationary, it will have to be a frame.

For all of the navigation to show, everything is going to need to be moved way up and/or made smaller. If you think 800x600 is bad, have your client look at it at 640x480, which some people do use. The other alternative is to put a scroll bar there which will be way Ugly.

You might consider placing the nav text right on the left frame graphic (save a copy of the original graphic) and make hotspots on it from there.

The art of compression is to take graphics down in file size as far as you can without degradation. It takes a little time, patience, and practice. They will already look a little less glitzy than print because they cannot show at better than 72dpi. With print you're talking approximately 300dpi.

The graphics have to come down in file size and the pages have to become faster or no one is going to see his wonderful work. Internet viewers just will not stick around for slow business pages....entertainment, yes. That's a whole different world.

Feel free to show him these comments. (And good luck.)

Sandy

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[This message has been edited by Goober (edited 08-06-2001).]


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gorilla

 

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RE: Please take a look - 8/7/2001 20:31:00   
Hi Paula,

Actually Sandy has said it all. It is a very different medium and thus has its own rules. I hope you do manage to persuade your client as really that site and the work deserve to be better known, at present because of the speed that's a bit unlikely.


Mark


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Paula

 

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RE: Please take a look - 8/7/2001 20:48:00   
Hi Sandy & Mark,
Thank you very much for your kind and helpful remarks! I'm working on all the problems everyone has mentioned. I've decided to optimize all the photos as much as I dare and see if that reduces the load time enough to make a difference. I'll post again when I've got it all done and ask you guys to check it out for me. Everyone here is so nice and helpful. Thank you all again.
Paula

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RE: Please take a look - 8/7/2001 17:06:00   
You might want to have a look at the image optimiser here: www.xat.com - I wouldn;t be without it! They used to have a free jpeg optimiser - not sure if they still do.

You will find that properly optimised images lose nothing much in quality on the web - having very high quality images is fine but the screen can only render them to a certain level. The key is to 'optimise' not frantically compress

Also, as Sandy said, saving in the correct format can dramatically reduce file size while actually improving the quality of the image.

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RE: Please take a look - 8/7/2001 21:33:00   
Hi Paula,
I like the basic layout of the site but agree with all the other comments posted above - especially the sizing. While I know you asked about design elements, may I offer you a couple of tips from a professional writer/editor? (I'm usually here trying to get answer to design questions myself!)
Obviously as a potential customer I'm interested in how this company advertises itself and it's not just images but words that count as well. "With clients from Florida to Alaska..." presents a clear mental image without adding all those other states. One-stop and voice-over should be hyphenated. Is it really an "identify" package? (just asking, looked like it might be a typo). I know how picky some people can be about their bios but, if at all possible, I think Michael Dyche needs to be identified as the owner of the company right off the top. I was wondering why I was reading about a voice-over talent until I got to the third paragraph (which of course has to be scrolled to).
Anyhow, those are just a couple of things. I think it's a great job though and I wish you the best of luck.
Chris

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gorilla

 

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RE: Please take a look - 8/8/2001 20:36:00   
Hi Paula,

You're very welcome! Just thought I'd add somewhat to what Katherine has said - proper file type (gif vs jpeg) and optimisation is key to all.

I've never used the xat product but if katherine reckons she can't do without it then that's a pretty high recommendation in my book. (Katherine's graphics sparkle.)

To give you an example of the importance of file type I have a photo which is 128k as a gif and 52k (uncompressed) as a jpg file.

compression ratios - well it's a question of trying it out for size -

Just to give you some options if you don't want to use the xat product for a while.

1. As you have frontpage you've also got image composer (it's on the second cd)

in image composer do this:

import each image then click the image to save

then file|save for the web

try the various options gif vs jpg and experiment with compression ratio for jpg.

2. Pixia

A graphics editor that I now use a lot is pixia. It's really good, actually i take that back - it's superb. As it's free the price is pretty excellent also. You can get it here.

http://www.ab.wakwak.com/~knight/

That page has a great set of links to tutorials as well. (some of them downloadable.) you'll be able to do pretty well everything you want to do in that - it's very powerful.

(Download the helpfile also.)

3. Gimp has been ported to windows!!!!

(That "bump bump bump" sound you're hearing is me jumping up and down in delight )

http://www.gimp.org/~tml/gimp/win32//

don't be put off by the "I'm not responsible if it crashes" from Tor Lillquist it's very stable in fact i don't know anybody that it has crashed on.

4. Fookes software have a very good thumbnailer I did a huge postingf on it for somebody and he very nicely popped into the graphics forum here.

Here's the link to that.

http://www.frontpagewebmaster.com/ubb/Forum10/HTML/000564.html

5. One last trick - you can chop up very large images into pieces and mortar them together into a table. The utility to do that is called splitz and yuo can get it here:

http://www.b-zone.de/index.htm

(yes its free too )

Side note to katherine and all you other graphics wizards - try pixia - I think you'll get a pleasant surprise.

Kind regards to all,

Mark


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Paula

 

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RE: Please take a look - 8/8/2001 13:04:00   
Thank you Katherine, Chris & Mark! I'm feeling much more confident now about compressing the graphic files. Several programs I'm going to check out. Chris, thanks for the editorial comments, you made some very good points! I think I'll make those changes and see if he agrees (he should!) You have all been so helpful and I appreciate it more than you know. It looks like he may want me to do websites for some of his clients. I'm beginning to think maybe I can do this stuff after all!
Thank you again,
Paula

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gorilla

 

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RE: Please take a look - 8/9/2001 23:09:00   
quote:
Originally posted by Paula:
I'm beginning to think maybe I can do this stuff after all!
Thank you again,
Paula

Based on what I and everyone else saw I don't think there's any doubt of that


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Paula

 

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RE: Please take a look - 8/9/2001 13:00:00   
Hi Mark,
Thank you so much! I've been unsure of whether or not I should even try this line of work, I really appreciate the encouragement. You made my day!
Paula

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Bill Nicol

 

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RE: Please take a look - 8/9/2001 13:24:00   
Hey...hey...Paula,

Sorry, I couldn't resist that reference...

Let me add that I took a looksee at the site, and whoa.... it is something !!

Artistic, great colors, very, very impressive.

Congratulations....


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Paula

 

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RE: Please take a look - 8/9/2001 15:38:00   
Hey Bill,
Not too many people get that reference, I love it! Thank you so much for your kind remarks and thank you for taking a look at the site. By the way, I enjoyed your site, my Grandmother was born in Ayrshire (sp) Scotland, I wish I knew as much about our clan!
Paula

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gorilla

 

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RE: Please take a look - 8/10/2001 20:42:00   
Paula - go for it - there's *always* room for talent - may I wish you every success.

Kind regards,

Mark

ooooh! I'd forgotten about the bursting into flames thingy.

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Bill Nicol

 

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RE: Please take a look - 8/10/2001 20:59:00   
Hi Paula,

So you're a fine Scottish lassie are ye? I've been to Ayrshire...quite lovely.

Well, like Gorilla, I wish you well.

Cheers


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PBailey

 

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RE: Please take a look - 8/12/2001 20:51:00   
Paula,
I just took another look at your site. It is a nice site but I did catch one thing that I had not seen before. You might want to title your pages on the page properties tab. I'm getting new new_page_1 on my task bar.

Good luck on those graphics. I'm also working at getting this optimizing thing down!

Paula (another one )


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Paula

 

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RE: Please take a look - 8/12/2001 17:09:00   
Hi everybody. I'm back and I think I may have gotten it finished. Please take another look and let me know what you think. Did I get the load time down enough? Anything else you see wrong? Everyone has been so great, thank you for all the help and encouragement!
Paula

(Bill, a fine Scottish lassie indeed, although a little long in the tooth these days!)
(Paula, thank you, I think I got that fixed. I always like to hear from another Paula! Don't run into that many, not a real common name.)


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gorilla

 

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RE: Please take a look - 8/13/2001 20:29:00   
Hi Paula,

*much* quicker (for me anyway) - I forgot to mention a very handy little utility called "webspeed" from a company called tafweb. It's free (Born mean that's me )

Whenever I want a more accurate estimate of a page's speed I use it rather than FrontPage. You can get it here:

http://www.tafweb.com - just follow the software link on the main menu. I especially like that it allows me to set a "congestion factor" - ie - how long will it take if the net is very busy?

Kind regards,

mark


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Bill Nicol

 

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RE: Please take a look - 8/14/2001 20:54:00   
Hi Paula,

Well, long in the tooth is good. I'm there as well and I like to think of folks like us as fine wines, just getting finer all the time.

Will take another look at an already great looking site.

How about my friend Gorilla? He's got a ton of experience and seems to know where to go to get the answers. And a fellow Brit as well.

Cheers


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gorilla

 

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RE: Please take a look - 8/16/2001 13:05:00   
quote:
Originally posted by Bill Nicol:
And a fellow Brit as well.

Cheers


I am NOT British. Irish yes, Danish yes, entitled to several other passports yes, English mother yes, none of which makes makes me British


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Bill Nicol

 

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RE: Please take a look - 8/16/2001 13:26:00   
Omigosh

For the second time today, I have to issue an "oops". Sorry for the misnomer. Being of Celtic blood and roots, I should know better.

I met a Scottish guy a couple of months ago whose name was Kenny. When I inadvertently and innocently called him Ken, he quickly corrected me and asked me to call him Kenny as "Ken" was too anglicized.

I understand such sensitivities and sensibilities over such sovereign identities. Please accept my apologies for such a mistake.

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Paula

 

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RE: Please take a look - 8/16/2001 15:57:00   
Hi everybody,
Thanks for all your help. I'll keep reading the posts here (I learn so much everyday) and maybe one day I'll be able to answer a question for somebody else! Mark,
thank you yet again, you've been so much help! Love the "webspeed" link, that's really handy. Best wishes to all.
Paula

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Goober

 

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RE: Please take a look - 8/17/2001 20:56:00   
Hi.

The load speed is much better.

I can now see more of the links in the left frame. Is there supposed to be a contact button? If so, it's below the edge of the browser.

There's a sizeable side-to-side scroll on the home page and a lesser one on the Illustration and Graphic Design pages.

The phrase, "graphic design," is still being broken on some of the pages in the bottom nav bar. I would suggest putting a non-breaking space between them to keep the phrase together.

Fernly Hills and Mountain spring would look a lot better saved as .gifs. The squiggles around them are from being saved as .jpgs.

Good job,
Sandy

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