RE: well...i'm nervous - 8/29/2001 20:47:00
Couldn't agree more with Troy's comments above - nice site.You do however need to get someone to do a grammar check for you for example: "We at pastfriend.com we value your thoughts and suggestions. Please take advantage of the Wish List to make pastfriend.com the "friendliest" place on the web." Should read: "We at pastfriend.com value your thoughts ......" Similarly: "Get reunited with friends from your past. It could be a friend from anywhere. From grammar school to college. From an old neighborhood to a summer camp. There is no limit....." should read: "Be reunited ....." Q. How do I contact a friend? A. Here is how is works.......
should read: "A. Here is how it works ......" There's a balance to be struck between language usage that's friendly and relaxed and language that's overformal and stiff mostly you've achieved that. I suggest however that you get someone else to proofread your content, it's horribly easy to miss such things yourself simply because you are so close to it. You've got such a such a good site that it's a shame to have it spoilt by content errors such as the examples above.
------------------ Kind regards, Gorilla aka Mark Saunders Email Address: marksaunders@techie.com ======= Error 1023! Bad or missing mouse - spank the cat?
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