RE: critique my site - 9/16/2001 16:00:00
I would have to agree with the previous posts - it is a bit sparse and 'texty'.People simply do not read this sort of thing online - you need heading, bulleted points, something to click. Even a graphic or two perhaps. I find the fontface being so large a bold looks like hectoring or shouting and is unappealling. Making it big does not make it anymore likely to be read. A tip I read once on writing content for a web page suggested that you write what you want to say. Then edit it down to about half that. Then leave it for 24 hours, come back and edit it down to half again. Then you can start formatting it and putting some 'shape' on it so that it has a structure on the page. ------------------ Katherine InKK Design LinKKs - Kilkenny's Online Magazine -*-*-*-*-*-*-*-*-*-* "Dogs have owners, cats have staff!"
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