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washcap4

 

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critique my site - 9/10/2001 22:31:00   
I need some feedback, i'm need to know if i'm going in the right direction.

http://www.homecashflow.net

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Pat1971

 

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RE: critique my site - 9/12/2001 20:36:00   
Way more reading than I'm willing to do on the net. I did see some random grammar errors.

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smcfarland

 

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RE: critique my site - 9/16/2001 15:20:00   
If you are aiming for people to read the page, you are going in the wrong direction.

If you are looking for them to arrive and then close the window immediately...

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abbeyvet

 

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RE: critique my site - 9/16/2001 16:00:00   
I would have to agree with the previous posts - it is a bit sparse and 'texty'.

People simply do not read this sort of thing online - you need heading, bulleted points, something to click. Even a graphic or two perhaps. I find the fontface being so large a bold looks like hectoring or shouting and is unappealling. Making it big does not make it anymore likely to be read.

A tip I read once on writing content for a web page suggested that you write what you want to say. Then edit it down to about half that. Then leave it for 24 hours, come back and edit it down to half again. Then you can start formatting it and putting some 'shape' on it so that it has a structure on the page.

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washcap4

 

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RE: critique my site - 9/26/2001 23:28:00   
Thanks for the input. i'm making changes i'll post again when i'm done

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