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I"m back again, can you help me find mistakes?

 
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vteccruzn

 

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From: chino hillscausa
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I"m back again, can you help me find mistakes? - 9/24/2001 20:25:00   
Hi,

heres my site www.importtrends.com and i've incorporated a cart to it, but it is a different layout. Dont quite know how to change the cart layout yet.

Please let me know what you think and I am looking for ways to improve the site!

please be critical since I"m trying to sell auto accessories here, and need all the page views as I can get.

Scott

Reflect

 

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RE: I"m back again, can you help me find mistakes? - 9/24/2001 20:21:00   
Hi,

This is what I found...

First off nice cross browser compatible site, good job!!!

Page title you have none, might want to add one.

In the keyword meta you might want to only repeat a given keyword three times. Example: import.

You might want to drop the <br> tags in the "Welcome to ImportTrends.com Premier source where you can accessorize your...Etc..." as it makes for broken lines/sentances. Viewing 1024X768 resolution.

On the logo, it looks very nice, you might want to start with the front end of the car (which you allready do) then have your text and then end (on the right hand side) with the end of the same car, just a thought.

When I tried your "Product Find" it gave me a 404/page not found. On that note why not make a site map and have the server host use it for 404/page not found errors.

Really liked your "car pics" page. Anyone got a free $100,00.00 grand I could use .?

On your "about us" page maybe go into your background in the car area. Really sell what makes you stand out here. Show your passion for the subject and let it shine.

Overall very nice site. Good colors and fast load times are a plus.

Brian

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RE: I"m back again, can you help me find mistakes? - 9/24/2001 20:33:00   
Don't forget to change your ALT tags. I looked at the Pics/Mario page and on one the ALT tag is blahblahyadayada_small.jpg. Is that a new kind of car??

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vteccruzn

 

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From: chino hillscausa
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RE: I"m back again, can you help me find mistakes? - 9/24/2001 15:45:00   
Hi Brian,

Yes all were great suggestions and I"m gonna implement those this week. Yeah also, love your idea on the start with car and then end with the back wheels on car. Hope i have the images for that.

Now i'm gonna go do some work, and have to find a way to make my about us page shine. I guess I"ll have to browse some sites for some ideas. 8-)

oh Millie! Thanks the bladyayaydayay or whatever is a brand new car, hehe dat goes 0-60 in 20 minutes! hehe, I think it was left over from the pic name. gotta change it thanks.

haven't had my first sale yet, but hopefully soon. hehe

Scott


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danielisa

 

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From: wichita, ks usa
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RE: I"m back again, can you help me find mistakes? - 10/11/2001 17:21:00   
not a bad site, although the links on the top nav bar seemed difficult to read, and the mario car pic page didn't work for me....i like the smalltown poets, though... ( :

dan


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