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Adila
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5 become 1 - 8/7/2004 12:07:50
Ok.. here's the address:
http://www.geocities.com/adila_ny/
Well... the first page of it looks... dunno how to say.. but pretty bad.. so, any idea in changing it to some other colour? Tell me if some links r broken...
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Peppergal
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RE: 5 become 1 - 8/9/2004 12:25:10
Hi there!
It would be nice to see more pictures of your family besides just on the front page. Also, why not give more descriptive reasons of "why your mom is the best mom" or dad is the best dad - write about something specific that makes them stand out from the crowd more than "Because she's my mom!" Does she make the world's best gravy? Does she have a lot of patience? When did she show how devoted she is to her family? What kinds of things does she do for your family? And things like that.
Show us some pictures of you all doing things you enjoy - maybe some pictures from a vacation or something special like holidays or Christmas. Share some favorite stories or jokes or something specific about your family members - something beyond the "vital statistics" like age, birthday, height, etc. What do you like to do together? What's your favorite memory of each person or what is your favorite family memory? Any pets? Stuff like that.
I agree with Andy - it's on its way to being a nice family site. Just give us some more information.
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I like the idea of the tree but would make it smaller with maybe the photo's of your family underneath. I really like the way you have set out the other pages on the site but maybe the background colours are a little too bright (for my tastes anyway). 