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Youngster

 

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Entertainment Site - 9/29/2004 23:26:03   
Hi,

This is the first site I have done for a customer. Your opinions/suggstions would be welcome. :)

Cheers

Youngster
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RE: Entertainment Site - 9/29/2004 23:27:05   
Would help if I gave you the URL !!

www.onlyentertainment.com.au

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RE: Entertainment Site - 9/30/2004 0:01:38   
tooooo black and white even just one of the heading words in colour would help e.g. Only Entertainment. comic sans looks a bit naff and clashes with the headings. otherwise looks nice abd clean. i wonder though wether it needs to be a bit more dynamic and colourful, like street theatre?

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Youngster

 

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RE: Entertainment Site - 9/30/2004 0:16:46   
Do you have a suggestion for the text font?

Thanks for the quick feedback!

Cheers

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d a v e

 

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RE: Entertainment Site - 9/30/2004 0:19:48   
verdana, or possibly times with some letterspacing and tweaked line height

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RE: Entertainment Site - 9/30/2004 7:01:31   
Bring it in from the edges a bit. It's right up against the left hand side and would look better with a border.

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RE: Entertainment Site - 9/30/2004 9:28:03   
I agree with dave's Verdana suggestion.

I second jaybee's padding suggestion.

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RE: Entertainment Site - 9/30/2004 9:47:08   
I agree with the padding and font.
Personally I like the black and white

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Youngster

 

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RE: Entertainment Site - 9/30/2004 21:15:43   
Thanks for your suggestions.

I appreciate your comments and have taken them into account and made some changes to the site.

Thanks again

Mark

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RE: Entertainment Site - 10/1/2004 0:28:04   
I, too, like the black and white...but I'd lose the huge "HOME" in the corner of the home page - it really looks like it's part of the title.

I'd put a bit of space between the bottom navigation and the bottom of the page, as well.

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