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devek
Posts: 13 Joined: 11/29/2004 From: Virginia, USA Status: offline
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Please comment on my new design - 11/29/2004 23:16:18
I have just finished playing with Xara Webstyle4 and some other applications and re-wrote the front page of my site: http://www.2flare.com The links work with the previous design (you can compare overall image). The site is "alive" and working - this is not a test site. On the same note, you can checkout my more relaxed site at: http://www.rses.com Your comments are appreciated. Thanks
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ashesh
Posts: 13 Joined: 11/20/2004 Status: offline
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RE: Please comment on my new design - 11/29/2004 23:37:36
I think most of the text on the front page doesn't fit into the frame with border and spills out. It would have been great if the home/about, 2flare and other button along with the cup fit into the left menu border. And of all the description on the right fits into the main border area.
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devek
Posts: 13 Joined: 11/29/2004 From: Virginia, USA Status: offline
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RE: Please comment on my new design - 11/30/2004 22:47:47
Found the problem. It is the missing "x" (quotes) in some of the commands. IE doesn't like it. FireFox doesn't care... maybe it should. I went back to the older design until I'll find time to fix it.... which already gave me a new idea for the whole site.... again, need to find time. Can't believe how I was fooled by the perfect display of FireFox and missed the total mess of IE. Thanks for the comments. Learning every day.
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devek
Posts: 13 Joined: 11/29/2004 From: Virginia, USA Status: offline
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RE: Please comment on my new design - 12/1/2004 9:59:01
JayBee, Yes, you are correct. It is better to test on both browsers... with great hopes that IE will fade away soon... I checked your work at JB Visions. Very nice. So you like Xara too ha...
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Larry M.
Posts: 2906 Joined: 2/20/2003 From: Greenville, South Carolina, USA Status: offline
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RE: Please comment on my new design - 12/1/2004 12:15:47
devek, Poor: grammar, sentence structure, improper use of tenses, (mis)spelling, punctuation, etc. immediately negates the commercial value of any site. You need to rework the following http://www.2flare.com home page non-sentence: "Always fresh and produce in small batches that immediately delivered" Also, you might want to rethink the color, size and font style of the home page text since it does not agree with the rest of the site.
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devek
Posts: 13 Joined: 11/29/2004 From: Virginia, USA Status: offline
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RE: Please comment on my new design - 12/1/2004 15:28:37
Larry M. Thank you very much. Yes, after reading it again, I realized how your view bangs head-on with Prof. Simon of Dominion University who thought the site was very marketable... Go figure. I changed the front page and it makes more sense now. The only thing I can still say for myself is: as one who English is not his first language, I didn't do THAT bad. I appreciate the direct response. I hope the new look makes more sense.
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Larry M.
Posts: 2906 Joined: 2/20/2003 From: Greenville, South Carolina, USA Status: offline
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RE: Please comment on my new design - 12/1/2004 15:44:28
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The only thing I can still say for myself is: as one who English is not his first language, I didn't do THAT bad devek, I agree!
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