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womble -> RE: A Town Site (4/20/2005 9:20:33)
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Hi Tink, and welcome to OF.
I liked the site and thought the main pic on the first page is great, though perhaps a little too large and better centred? The page says 'click picture to enter site', but doesn't say which picture. I tried clicking the main pic at the top of the page and of course nothing happened, clicked the 'train to Beckinsaleville' pic and of course off I went to the station, but there again I was confused - no instructions, no way to get back to the main page or anywhere else. I just clicked the picture because I couldn't think what else to do, and of course off I went then. Perhaps some instructions needed for the slow ones like me!
Probably the navigation on the first page could do with being a little more prominent, though I loved the idea of the town map for lost souls! The main problem I found was that other than the 'back' button on my browser, there was no way to get to anywhere else on any of the other pages, no navigation.
Overall though, I thought it was a good idea and you've obviously put a lot of work into it.
womble [:)]
PS - There's also a heck of a lot of blank space down at the bottom of the first page - I think you probably need to reduce your page height.
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