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Critique Request: www.anigroupinc.com - 8/29/2005 14:22:00
Hello. I would greatly appreciate any and all feedback on my business site. I'm mainly looking for functionality critiques, but general appearance critiques are also welcome. I'm especially interested in how the site functions on other browsers besides IE6. Also, I'm most interested in the Application page, which can be accessed through the Mystery Shoppers page. If you fill out the application but don't actually want to be put in my database, please enter "test" in the first and last name fields. Thank you in advance, your help is greatly appreciated.
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RE: Critique Request: www.anigroupinc.com - 8/30/2005 7:45:05
Awesome!! Thanks a lot, this is exactly what I wanted. Looks like I've got some work to do.
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RE: Critique Request: www.anigroupinc.com - 9/2/2005 16:10:53
I didn't think that the writing in the banner graphic was especially that bad personally.
Here's a couple of points I'd add:
The page width is too wide. Visitors on anything less that 1152px monitor setting (around 90+% at a guess) will have to constantly side-scroll to read them!
Why do 'enquires' and 'contact us' lead to two separate pages?
Pages are a little too plain IMO.
Nav graphics need sharpening.
As for search engine optimisation - you'll need to utilise page titles and numerous other things a lot more.
Hope these all help
All the best
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RE: Critique Request: www.anigroupinc.com - 9/2/2005 21:36:26
Oh yes, it all helps. I have a hard time realizing that not everybody has a big hi-rez monitor like I do. I've actually been meaning to thin out my site a bit. Any way you could expound on the "Nav graphics need sharpening" comment? Also, optimization... what's wrong with the titles I have? I'm really just starting to learn about the whole optimization thing.
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RickP
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RE: Critique Request: www.anigroupinc.com - 9/3/2005 7:31:17
Re the page 'titles' - I mean the <title>etc etc.</title> in the <head></head> part of the HTML - at present you have the same words on each page. Ideally, you need to treat each page of your site as a doorway into the the site and therefore aim at a different set of key words/phrases on each page. The title tag is very important but so are many other things too - best do a search on this forum or Google for "how to optimise web pages for engines"
Re the button graphics - just personal opinion but I think the fuzzy grey outer edge looks poor - it would be okay if it was transitioning into the colour of the page background but on the white it doesn't look smart to me.
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RE: Critique Request: www.anigroupinc.com - 9/3/2005 10:19:54
Ahh, ok. I see what you are saying. Thanks a lot for this info... it's very helpful.
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