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UPRDrew -> Hey... (6/20/2006 13:00:46)

Hey guys. Long time, no post :) I have another site awaiting some constructive criticism :D

www.kyokuacademy.co.uk

I've had one or two reports that the links are dead, although everyone else haven't had any problems. I'll leave that up to you :)

Thanks a lot guys




womble -> RE: Hey... (6/20/2006 14:48:49)

To be honest, the first thing that put me off about the site was the animated gif which didn't seem to serve any useful purpose. There's nothing on the home page at all to tell you what the site's about. That said,

Second thing, the text on the menu is far too small. It's not an easy to read font and I had to increase the text size a couple of times before I could make it out well enough to figure out which to press.

With your text, though you're fine on contrast between the text and background, all of your text is in italics, which makes it very difficult to read, especially where there are large blocks of text. You should only use italics for emphasis and for small amounts of text.

Overall though, it's quite a nice looking site and the colours work well together.




billoutfrontforum -> RE: Hey... (6/22/2006 12:02:06)

Increase the text size and get rid of the italics. It detracts and annoys.

The spinning red doo-ma-hitchy on the home page serves no purpose as far as I can tell.

But that's just me.

Look at other karate school websites. Here is a directory of U.S. schools.




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