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Murvi

 

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Critique please - 6/29/2006 8:04:39   
Had the site up for a few weeks but still having trouble with the reservations form!
Any suggestions welcome.

http://www.theoldbyre.net
swoosh

 

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RE: Critique please - 6/29/2006 11:08:37   
Hi Ya Murvi, welcome to the Outfront Forums

One suggestion would be to put the hyperlinks at the top or to the left top of the page. Maybe it's just me but I don't think visitors will like having to scroll the page just to view your navigation.

Navigation should be easily accessible once the page loads

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anderskorte

 

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RE: Critique please - 6/29/2006 11:34:25   
I agree the navigation in in the wrong place, but the page uses whitespace in a way that I don't want to see broken. Maybe you should put the navigation at the very top, or let it stay at the bottom—at least it doesn't fit in the left or right of the page, if you want to retain the current look and feel.

I like the script font in the logo, but maybe you shouldn't narrow it like that, it hurts the letterforms and looks very unprofessional. This is mostly a personal preference. You may consider getting some other narrow script font for the logo, but you can keep the Lucida Calligraphy in other places.

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