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tdmatte

 

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Critique please... - 7/3/2006 10:28:05   
Hi,
Any comments and suggestions would be appreciated. This web site is a labour of love and is constantly being tweaked. I'd appreciate any feedback from internet surfers, and am especially interested in the opinion of business owners.

Questions to consider:
1) Ease of use/Navigation
2) Clear understanding of topic of web site
3) Questions you may have that are not addressed in site
3) Eye appeal
4) ETC...

Please visit www.shoppersconfidential.com

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RE: Critique please... - 7/3/2006 10:44:33   
This was strange!

Everytime I go to your Information Page and scroll down a bit, it makes my monitor flicker off and on. First I thought it was my monitor but it's not. I am using IE 6.0. Let's see if any others run into the same problem.

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Tailslide

 

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RE: Critique please... - 7/3/2006 10:55:35   
I'd advise against the loud music it nearly gave me the shock of my life!

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anderskorte

 

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RE: Critique please... - 7/3/2006 10:57:27   
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2) Clear understanding of topic of web site

Make “What is Mystery Shopping?” to be found in some easier place, since many people don't have any idea what it means. It's currently under Client FAQs under Information, which is pretty far from the homepage.

quote:

3) Eye appeal

Comic Sans = horror. Why not use the same Futura you've used for the navigation elements? It looks fantastic. Put it in an image and give it an appropriate alt text, and you're fine.

The #0000FF blue is too harsh for the rest of the color scheme. You've used it as heading text color and as a background for other headings.

Also the little buttons “Member Login”, “Request Quote” etc. — It's somehow confusing, because they're mostly used on blogs as links to other websites. They do stand out, though.

quote:

4) ETC...

The website doesn't validate.

But in overall... it looks fabulous. The image on the left fits the message of the website, and the color scheme is nicely balanced (skin tones being the counter color of light blue). The navigation is visually clear and even the subnavigation under the Information link works and is easy to grasp. And then the usual location for copyright text, what does it say: “Your #1 Mystery Shopping Service”. I'm actually a little jealous.

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anderskorte

 

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RE: Critique please... - 7/3/2006 11:00:00   
I don't like the intro either. It seems unnecessary.

I think the only websites that need intros are fashion sites.

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RE: Critique please... - 7/3/2006 14:01:25   
Overall, I like the site.

It was easy to navigate.

I understood your topic after a little reading.

Eye appeal....it's fine.

The intro: I'm not a big fan of intros with music, but that's just me. You might want to change the music. The music you have now is not appealing to me at all.

Good luck.

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womble

 

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RE: Critique please... - 7/3/2006 16:01:44   
Intros on the whole totally unecessary (and music is a big no-no), and if you're going to have a 'skip intro' link, make sure it works (I tried it three times before it finally let me skip the intro, by which time I guess it was nearly done.

There appears to be something strange going on with your navigation on hover. The first time I hovered over them the colours went and there were just white voids in their place.

You could do with some padding on the text on the homepage - it's very squashed together. And please, loose the marquee - doesn't help at all and lowers the tone.

Other than that, not bad.

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d a v e

 

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RE: Critique please... - 7/3/2006 16:01:59   
i clicked away sas soon as the intro music disrupted my ambient listening :(

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walrus

 

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RE: Critique please... - 7/3/2006 18:57:18   
takes to long to load

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tdmatte

 

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RE: Critique please... - 7/5/2006 14:53:35   
Hi everyone,
Thanks for all of your feedback. I have taken the advice of the majority and have removed my 'musical' intro. I am still considering other changes and will invite everyone again to have a look.

Any new visitors are still welcome to post their comments/critique.

:) The more the merrier!

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RE: Critique please... - 7/5/2006 14:59:19   
Must be something on my end but everytime I scroll down the page on your Services page my monitor begins to blink off and on.........I will try from my home computer later on tonight and see if it happens

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RE: Critique please... - 7/6/2006 9:23:55   
Tried it at home and everything was fine. Must be something on the work pc that is causing that.

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