RE: Review please - 11/16/2001 17:05:00
The thing that jumps out at me is the incorrect use of "apostrophe s" several places on the home page. (I haven't gone further than that.)Apostrophe s indicates possession...something belongs to something. This does not hold true for the word, "it." It's means it is. Apostrophe s can also be part of a conjunction where two words are joined together such as, "she's"...she is. Things like this are very distracting and leave a bad impression. There is also a place in the footer that needs a space between two words...not endorse. Best wishes, Sandy ------------------ Stu Reilly Design TheTemplateStore Allegheny Web Dreamweaver Sites
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