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Seventh -> RE: Website Critique needed (10/3/2006 21:18:14)
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Hi, palehorse.
First, congratulations for getting this far. And hopefully this first will not be your last. With that said, shall we begin?
DISCLAIMER: This is only my opinion. [;)]
1. Home Page
- The first thing I notice is that there's no logo. Is their a reason for that? Is that what the picture of what seems to be someone's home is for, or is that the HC Mortgage Lending office?
- It's a simple layout. Almost too simple. There seems like there should be more pertinent information on this page to draw me in more.
2. About Us Page
- Instead of having additional links to get more information for the employees you should just put them on this page. That's less time I have to spend clicking links.
- There's a lot of space between the 1st and 2nd paragraph.
- You might want to put in information about where they're located, how long they've been in that area, etc.
3. Apply Now
- That first statement could be considered misleading. Being pre-approved does not increase your chances of getting your dream home. However, it does speed up the process of purchasing a home.
- I would let people know that there are different ways to fill out the applications on this page - Online and PDF. You may also want to put a link to the Adobe site where they can download Acrobat if they do not have it.
- You may also want to include some facts about Pre-Approval and how it would benefit the visitor.
4. Contact Us Page
5. Calculators Page
- Are you sure you want to have an image on here that gives the impression of a negative balance?
6. Loan Process Page
- The paragraph in the middle should be on the first line.
- The names in the links under 'The Loan Process' do not match the names in the descriptions below.
7. FAQs Page
- Hmmm...the best way I could say it is I would need an FAQ to understand the FAQs. It needs to be redone.
Final Thoughts:
Overall you've got most of the ingredients in place. You just need to put them together to make the cake. [:D]
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