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Needed Constructive reviews - 10/14/2006 14:08:11
Recently i've made a site promoting movie download programs. I would appreciate any constructive reviews for my site.
Please click/paste to enter into the site:
http://best-movie-download.50webs.com
thanks in advance
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anderskorte
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RE: Needed Constructive reviews - 10/14/2006 15:07:24
The top banner needs professional help. Take a critical second look at it and you know what I mean. The text runs out of the 3D effect, and the grey/dark red combination doesn't work at all.
Everything is centered, it's too linear and too monotonous. It lacks any excitements, although the content is quite the contrary. You need to make it more unified, balanced.
About the content: “Best Movie Download Reviews” sounds a little too much. Why is it the best? And you don't allow anyone to do anything, you just link to different sites.
It's a wonderful idea, but you just need to make it more interesting. It's a good base and concept to build a site upon.
It just doesn't get much points from me at this point...
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RE: Needed Constructive reviews - 10/14/2006 15:44:37
how can it be subjective AND unbiased? surely it was one or the other?
ditto anders on the 'header'
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RE: Needed Constructive reviews - 10/19/2006 9:58:00
Thanx a lot for your suggestions guyz ! Ya..I'm thinking of redesigning the header. It will take a couple of days.
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RE: Needed Constructive reviews - 10/19/2006 12:28:55
Take off any unnecessary 3D effects and borders you can't handle to do too well in Photoshop (or whatever graphics app you're using). There are many graphic designers who aren't that good in photo editing etc. so they go the simple route. You will be fine with bright colors and a layout that makes sense. Make sure the colors go well together, unlike now.
I still firmly believe that if you just take a critical second look, you'll notice the aesthetic flaws in your design. There are many.
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RE: Needed Constructive reviews - 10/26/2006 1:01:01
it really took time to load... very slow loading ...
i could not stand the loading ... really is taking my time ...
do something with it .. will you
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RE: Needed Constructive reviews - 10/26/2006 21:11:32
Fastly?
That word is really not commonly used anymore and looks odd. You might want to consider using "fast" or "quickly" instead.
Common Errors in English
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RE: Needed Constructive reviews - 10/31/2006 2:00:03
And, to add to the above, I would like to comment about the triple dots and exclamation marks. I would try to dump the triple quotation marks, one is enough. You don't need the three dots after the word 'to' . I would re-word your title like this (and i'm not an English teacher, so for all who can find flaws in my title, you can edit):
"Best Movie Download Reviews Allows You to Download High Quality DVD Movies the Fast, Safe, Easy and Legal Way."
I tried to use finally in the title, but it was a bit too much. If you really want to use it, you can stick "Finally, a Site that" in front of the word 'Allows'. Then you can put a '-' in the back of the word 'Way' and put Best Movie Download Reviews.
Also, watch your open and closing quotes and wrap text around your graphics. Keep trying, you can improve this greatly if you take the advice of everyone (which you are doing). You have a very interesting topic for your web site.
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RE: Needed Constructive reviews - 11/6/2006 9:11:09
quote:
ORIGINAL: intiendes
it really took time to load... very slow loading ...
i could not stand the loading ... really is taking my time ...
do something with it .. will you
I think it takes one min according to submit express !
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RE: Needed Constructive reviews - 1/23/2007 19:07:49
Thanx a lot guyz for helping me a lot. I thought its better to have my own site and developed a new domain instead of using a free domain.
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