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vijaygupta -> Review site for SEO work (12/8/2006 7:26:59)

Hi All,
This is my first posting to this forum. I want to have suggestion on my sites seo work from the webmaster who are on this forum....Please suggest me something new to make my site better.

website link is here:

http://www.teckfusionsystems.com

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jaybee -> RE: Review site for SEO work (12/8/2006 9:14:10)

Hi Vijay.

You should start by changing all the content on your front page.

quote:

"Never doubt that a small group of thoughtful, committed people can change the world. Indeed. It is the only thing that ever has." --Margaret Mead

Being with Teckfusion is being with a Team of substance. One man alone can be pretty dumb sometimes, but for real bonafide work there is always a great team. We believe in our people and their strength. They have positively made themselves accountable for their expertise. As part of our vision we have made a system by which everybody, every team, every platform, every division; every component is there not for individual competitive profit or recognition, but for contribution to the system as a whole on a win-win basis. So, we never know, believe us, when we have succeeded in proving ourselves to be the best. Fundamentally no person will make a great business who wants to do it all himself or get all the credit.
As a team our primary objective to achieve client satisfaction. We are a team of committed professionals and it is this commitment that differentiates us from our competition. Our commitment to client satisfaction, timeliness and quality - overall client success.


I read that several times and it seems to me you have just spent hundreds of words telling me that you are a team. You could replace the whole lot with "We are a team".

Other than in the flash box, there is nothing on that page that says what you do. People aren't interested whether you're a team or not. They just want a job done. How you do it is your problem.

The testimonials box scrolls too fast to read properly and it's jumpy.

Your meta description isn't a description it's just a load of keywords, your keywords are key phrases and they duplicate the content in the other two

Your keywords are not in the page content.




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