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nashville1012 Posts: 108 Joined: 1/29/2006 Status: offline	Would love your feedback - 1/27/2007 18:18:17 I'd love your feedback on anything I can/should do to improve my site. Comments in any area or welcome. Cheers. www.preownedweddingdressesDOTcom


Larry M. Posts: 2605 Joined: 2/20/2003 From: Greenville, South Carolina, USA Status: online	RE: Would love your feedback - 1/27/2007 18:56:50 You are not capturing visitor interest fast enough because too much text precedes the bridal dress photos which are presently "below the fold". You can keep the text, but display the dress photos sooner with a continuation of text after. Also, buttons agreeing with the red text in the header area would be a better choice than the existing rather bland text buttons. Lastly, your "call to action" statement of ..."- a better way to buy or sell a new, sample or used wedding dress" is very weak. Tell visitors why they should do business with you and create some urgency with "special sale", "free shipping", "dramatic reduction", etc. And - a product must - have some sort or satisfaction guarantee statement along with facility for ease of payment via PayPal, etc. < Message edited by Larry M. -- 1/27/2007 19:05:10 > _____________________________ Larry M. A liberal is a person whose interests aren't at stake at that moment. (in reply to nashville1012)


d a v e Posts: 4009 Joined: 7/24/2002 From: England (but live in Finland now) Status: offline	RE: Would love your feedback - 1/28/2007 3:24:39 too grim for wedding dress site lose the background those horizintal lines make it look grey and hard to read why not ivory or champagne white or whatever colour it is that wedding dresses are instead? and matching colours for links etc _____________________________ David Prescott Gekko web design (in reply to Larry M.)


jaybee Posts: 13957 Joined: 10/7/2003 From: Berkshire, UK Status: offline	RE: Would love your feedback - 1/28/2007 8:05:47 I agree with what has been said above. At the moment the site gives me the impression of cheap, pile it high, yard sale. Value your product. Just because you're selling second hand doesn't mean the site can't look like a boutique. Take a look at some of these sites. If I were buying from you and found pre-owned on a site like these I would assume the products were quality. Sample 1 Sample 2 Sample 3 Sample 4 _____________________________ If it ain't broke..... fix it until it is. GAWDS Now where did I put that Doctype? (in reply to d a v e)


womble Posts: 5458 Joined: 3/14/2005 From: Living on the edge Status: offline	RE: Would love your feedback - 1/28/2007 9:09:43 I agree with all of the above. Too "industrial" (background), too bland, too much text above the fold, which is what matters because that's what visitors see first, and I don't know if it's just the background, or the fact I'm not a fan of serif fonts, but the font you have for the text doesn't do it any favours and I don't find it easy to read. When I'm working on a site site I always ask myself honestly - if I came across the site while searching the web, would I buy from it/use it? If the answer's no, or not sure, then I have a rethink. _____________________________ ~~ "A cruel god ain't no god at all" ~~ (in reply to jaybee)