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lalitdmc -> Reuest all of you to review my website (3/17/2007 23:30:36)

hi all
I have launched a new website. Please review and help to improve.
www.earnforyou.info
thanks
lalit



Tailslide -> RE: Reuest all of you to review my website (3/18/2007 3:05:51)

You might want to fit a little more content in there among the adverts.

In Firefox you've got a series of odd lines at the bottom of the left sidebar and "Expressions templates" is all squashed up at the bottom.

Take off the counter - it makes the site look amateur, they can be faked too easily.

Also - opening pages in a new window is a bit rude. If I wanted pages to open in a new window/tab, I'd have set my browser up to do that. There are occasional good reasons for new windows/tabs but this isn't one of them.



jaybee -> RE: Reuest all of you to review my website (3/18/2007 5:34:45)

I agree with everything Tailslide said.

quote:

You will not become rich overnight, but you will earn some extra income definitely.
Be very careful what you say. There are many examples of people who have lost money not made it. They may come back to you demanding compensation as you said......
quote:

you will earn some extra income definitely.



womble -> RE: Reuest all of you to review my website (3/18/2007 5:56:34)

Aside from opening pages in a new window (I agree with Tailslide - very rude), amongst all the ads in there, what little content there is there basically is one huge ad for Google Adsense. If I wanted to know about Adsense and how it works, I'd go to Google.



d a v e -> RE: Reuest all of you to review my website (3/18/2007 7:02:33)

colour scheme is a bit hard on the eyes

grammar in the opening (and other pages) isn't very good

" The Internet is growing very fast today and everyone wants to become rich. If you are working somewhere or you are a student, you can work part time at home and can earn substantially. There is no cost involved. Home based business is a fastest ???? and million dollar industry in present times and will grow further. You will not become rich overnight, but you will earn some extra income definitely.

Our aim is to help people achieve financial freedom and provide them with a genuine home based business oppurtunity."

the opening in new tabs is annoying enough for me to leave the site altogether ;)



Nicole -> RE: Reuest all of you to review my website (3/18/2007 7:11:04)

Actually Dave, I was just looking at this site before you responded and wondered how I could say what I was feeling tactfully.

Regardless of the colour sheme and layout, the amount of Google diversions on the site, it's the amount of those ads and the poor grammar that makes this site look exactly like what the content is trying not to say.

quote:

Internet is growing very fast today and Everyone wants to become rich.


It seems like you're about to dispell those myths, but how can you when there are so many "get rich quick" ads on the site and the content is written with grammar we expect in email scams.

Sorry, but if you're going to try and get user's trust, you're goung to have to word your content very professionally and rid the site of all those ads.



caz -> RE: Reuest all of you to review my website (3/18/2007 8:32:49)

Looking more closely at your site I would guess that your intended audience is local, ie India? So what may be seen as bad grammar elsewhere is colloquial English and so would be the norm for your audience.

That apart, I do agree that you need a lot more content in contrast to ads to tempt users to stay on the site, or else go straight to the forum on the bestindiandoctors link, where there is a little more to see.



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