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amykatherine -> please critique (4/2/2007 11:15:11)

Newly designed site.

http://hopefamilyministries.com

Thanks!




anderskorte -> RE: please critique (4/3/2007 8:49:23)

It's lovely, but it needs more whitespace and better alignment. Right now the frontpage seems too crowded, but you don't have to take anything out, just align it better and leave some breathing space there. My opinion is that the elements on pages should be aligned based on a balanced grid. It makes the website look more balanced and welcoming as opposed to out-of-place and confusing.

Basicly it's a great website, a good draft of the final, professional design with an exciting color scheme and good typography. The only thing missing now is the finetuning. You need to get rid of the just-thrown-together feel.




Mango Himself -> RE: please critique (4/11/2007 17:42:53)

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and good typography


hey andeskorte

haven't seen you in a while! Hows good ole Finland?


Nice site. Although I am o not into religious sites, this one is very nice




jaybee -> RE: please critique (4/11/2007 18:28:56)

It is very nicely done but I tend to agree with Anders. Too many words. The heading banner, the banner underneath and the text under that are all large. I don't know which bit to read first.

This allows your eyes a bit more focus

[image]local://upfiles/9075/0942B930685940E98EE890945B506865.jpg[/image]




anderskorte -> RE: please critique (4/13/2007 16:45:12)

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ORIGINAL: Mango Himself

hey andeskorte

haven't seen you in a while! Hows good ole Finland?

Finland is fine, thanks for asking. How's Outfront?

I drop by every now and then, to see if there's any typography or graphic design related discussions. Not much of them recently.




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