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hosseinalipour

 

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Please review my website - 4/24/2007 3:41:36   
Please review my website
www.english.aychy.com
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RE: Please review my website - 4/24/2007 6:35:33   
Welcome.

The site is clean and easy to read, there is only one thing I think needs to be looked at and that's the hand holding the card top left and the cube. They look like an afterthought and out of place.

I'd get rid of the hand and card and replace them with the cube.

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RE: Please review my website - 4/25/2007 11:18:58   
Nice clean look.

I don't care for the underlined links to the left and the right. A word here and there to make the visitor know it's a link, but all of it? It makes it hard to read.

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RE: Please review my website - 4/26/2007 14:53:29   
Hi Hosseinalipour,

I like the site. You may think about adding some text about what the site is for.

I assume it is a general current news site?

Barry


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d a v e

 

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RE: Please review my website - 4/26/2007 15:07:20   
agree that the hand is naff. text is a bit small too. also agree that only some of the words should be underlined e.g.
"How to Make a Native American Style Flute"
A 43 minute instructional video on CD-ROM.
Full-size illustration included.-----

only the first line should be a link

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hosseinalipour

 

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thanks - 4/28/2007 8:00:45   
review again Please
www.english.aychy.com
new desine

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jaybee

 

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RE: thanks - 4/28/2007 8:33:11   
Still has the same awful hand and text in the header, it looks cheap and nasty.

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RE: thanks - 5/9/2007 13:48:43   
Looks nice but you should make the site description text larger than the other text so that people immediately know what the site is about

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