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barry -> having a bit of fun! (9/13/2007 17:38:31)

Hey ALL!- I am back (again[&:])

Being well over 20 years old, I have gotten these nuggets of wisdom, so I put them in a site. I did not take long on the design but it is functional.

Whatcha think?

www.10reasonswhyyou.com

Barry



Larry M. -> RE: having a bit of fun! (9/13/2007 17:58:34)

10 Reasons Why You should...

Two occurences of "Not to" which is gramatically incorrect. Overall the site is quite unremarkable.



barry -> RE: having a bit of fun! (9/13/2007 18:04:11)

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unremarkable


thanks Larry!

I have long ago stopped shooting for "remarkable" in making fun sites.

Too time consuming [:D]

barry



Tailslide -> RE: having a bit of fun! (9/14/2007 2:38:51)

Submit is spelt incorrectly.

I think the problem with the site is that the design appears out of whack with the content. It looks like a very straight, conventional business site but the content would indicate that it's more of a humourous site.

Technically - all those lists should actually be html lists rather than tables - it's better semantically and it would look better.

Finally - don't stretch the banner images in the code as they look weird - do it in a graphics editor.



barry -> RE: having a bit of fun! (9/14/2007 18:20:22)

Thanks Tailslide,

That is really good observations. I will try to come up with a more appropriate design.

B free



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