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asoun

 

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Please review my site - 4/1/2008 22:36:20   
Hi

I would like to request an evaluation of the main page of my web site. This web site has been created as part of course work. Please note, several pages are still under construction. I would appreciate if you could comment if the main page would persuade you to either purchase the item, or at least prompt you to seek further information.

http://acadunix.algonquincollege.com/~soun0005/pgp/index.html

Thanks for your time and effort.

--asoun
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RE: Please review my site - 4/2/2008 2:21:57   
Are we going to be reviewing ALL the students' work from Algonquin College? Maybe we should charge a fee?

In brief.

1. Your logo looks blurry.
2. You've got a ton of coding errors in there - take the site to the W3C validator and get a list of errors then work through and remove them.
3. The nav bar only extends a certain distance - it should be full width at any browser width.

This is a template layout - don't you have to come up with one from scratch?

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d a v e

 

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RE: Please review my site - 4/2/2008 5:08:50   
that is one terrible logo :)

there's no way that fisrt letter of 'Garment' is a 'G' in the logo.

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