I've created a template for a web design class I'm taking. The site would sell web page design contracts. It's basic but none the less your critique on overall appearance would be much appreciated.
It's clean and clear but given what it's there for, it's far too basic. People who come to you for web sites expect to see something that they can picture being their site. Yours needs to have something that makes it stand out from the thousands and thousands of other web designers.
Assuming you are in your first web design class, it is a decent start. Web Design 101 doesnt get you to professional level - it ain't that easy. Best of luck and keep learning