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rallyn
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Site review - 4/7/2008 19:27:09
Hello. Please take a look at my site. It was created for a school assignment, but I intend to use components for a future website. It is not complete in terms of ecommerce functionality at the moment.
I am only concerned about the homepage for now. Since it's an ecommerce site, it is important to know if you would be willing to look for more information based on the homepage.
http://www.nalley.ca/christune/
Thanks a lot for your comments.
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d a v e
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From: England (but live in Finland now)
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RE: Site review - 4/8/2008 2:40:19
you need an image of a subaru at the top on the right of ChrisTune: Home
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Tailslide
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RE: Site review - 4/8/2008 2:43:22
I think that maybe it could do with a little more tuning (ha - see what I did there? Ok... sorry...).
Maybe moving the large image up to the top as on a smaller screen it's all a bit plain looking. Maybe find a few impressive looking Subarus - done up for rallying or just some that had a lot of money obviously spent on them and take a few arty photos (you know the sort of thing - close up shots of the alloys and front wing sweeping back at a tight angle etc)
Also - the first heading on the page is an H2 and should be an H1.
But overall - it's pretty well written code-wise which is an excellent start.
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