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leonsquare Posts: 4 Joined: 4/4/2008 Status: offline	Web site critique request - 4/8/2008 15:43:15 Hi there, Please take a look at my site, and please give your critique on main page. I am currently a student of Internet Application Programmer student. This critique request is part of my eCommerce course requirement. My professor wishes me to experience evaluation input not just from a scholarly level, but also from a peer and professional level. I only wish the main page to be critiqued on the basis of whether or not it would persuade a consumer to either purchase the item, or at least inquire for further information. Some of the pages, links or buttons of my site, for example return and shipping policy pages, submit order/registration link and submit payment button are not complete yet, the JavaScript alert box or "currently under construction" message will be displayed when click on these items because my focus of this site is the effectiveness of the main web page. Any comments are greatly appreciated, as well as any suggestions. Obviously you can disregard the text until I begin the testing/programming phase. Many thanks in advance for your help!


d a v e Posts: 3937 Joined: 7/24/2002 From: England (but live in Finland now) Status: online	RE: Web site critique request - 4/8/2008 16:05:59 is there a url? _____________________________ David Prescott Gekko web design (in reply to leonsquare)


Tailslide Posts: 5771 Joined: 5/10/2005 From: Out here on the raggedy edge Status: offline	RE: Web site critique request - 4/8/2008 17:04:30 Let me guess - Algonquin college? _____________________________ "My strategy is so simple an idiot could have devised it" Little Blue Plane Web Design \| Blood, Sweat & Rust - A Land Rover restoration project (in reply to d a v e)


jaybee Posts: 13784 Joined: 10/7/2003 From: Berkshire, UK Status: offline	RE: Web site critique request - 4/8/2008 17:13:22 Well to be honest with you, the site is lacking a certain something..... like a link so we can actually see it. _____________________________ If it ain't broke..... fix it until it is. GAWDS Now where did I put that Doctype? (in reply to Tailslide)


leonsquare Posts: 4 Joined: 4/4/2008 Status: offline	RE: Web site critique request - 4/9/2008 11:08:16 Hi folks, You are all right -- I am from Algonquin College and I did miss something obviously :( My apologize that I forgot to provide my site address :( Here it is: http://acadunix.algonquincollege.com/~xiao0012/8267/index.html Please critique it. Many many thanks :) (in reply to jaybee)


dpf Posts: 7121 Joined: 11/12/2003 From: India-napolis Status: offline	RE: Web site critique request - 4/9/2008 12:44:09 you have some repetitious styles that can be consolidated. I will let others expand on that. nice to see that your professor is teaching you some basic javascript. many in the business download scripts but lack a fundamental understanding and are at a loss as to how to modify them. _____________________________ Dan (in reply to leonsquare)


womble Posts: 5445 Joined: 3/14/2005 From: Living on the edge Status: offline	RE: Web site critique request - 4/9/2008 14:39:46 Also check out your pages with the W3C's validator - you've got some HTML errors in there, and you tend to get better marks if all of your code is correct and validates to your chosen doctype. _____________________________ ~~ "A cruel god ain't no god at all" ~~ (in reply to dpf)