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olverson
Posts: 2 Joined: 4/15/2008 Status: offline
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Input on how to make my web page better - 4/16/2008 0:02:03
I have just finished my Web site for my new book and company. I am trying for an organized and high quality look. Any input or tricks would be greatly appreciated. Thanks for the help. http://www.mydadisasoldier.com
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Tailslide
Posts: 5972 Joined: 5/10/2005 From: Out here on the raggedy edge Status: offline
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RE: Input on how to make my web page better - 4/16/2008 2:12:20
The main issue I have is that I find the text size and font really really hard to read. I'd increase the base font size (try not to use px to size the font otherwise people using IE won't be able to increase the size in their browser) and preferably change it to a serif font such as Verdana, Arial, Tahoma or Trebuchet MS.
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d a v e
Posts: 4054 Joined: 7/24/2002 From: England (but live in Finland now) Status: offline
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RE: Input on how to make my web page better - 4/16/2008 2:29:37
looks good! military yet not over the top. you're missing a few apostrophes: The children's book... Soldiers' activity their family member's role outside... text is too small for me too! there are a few more grammatical mistakes in the other pages (well, About Us, at least) - not so impressive for a site promoting a book! also for images like i_love_my_soldier_with_slogin.jpg that are only resized in the html you need to resize it in a graphics editor. oh and you need to optimise the book cover picture on the homepage -it's huge! 559.65 kB otherwise it's looking good :)
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olverson
Posts: 2 Joined: 4/15/2008 Status: offline
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RE: Input on how to make my web page better - 4/16/2008 14:29:03
WOW! Thanks for the quick responces. I will start correcting the errors today. If you have the time please take anothe look in a few days.
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