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Please critique this beginner's site! - 6/21/2008 16:22:15
I've worked out most of the bugs but I want some feedback before I add more content, does anyone care to critique my website? www.customcontentcompany.com I had some issues with the forms but now they are functional...
I am planning to add a resources section with informative articles and information related to web content, articles, SEO, and marketing. I am also planning on adding another page to describe some special project and package deals. Let me know what you think.
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RE: Please critique this beginner's site! - 6/21/2008 17:32:16
Wow, there is no adult content of any kind on the site, it is for a freelance writer/content company. I have no idea why a parental control would stop it from opening
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RE: Please critique this beginner's site! - 6/23/2008 10:26:27
You'll never get indexed by search engines with the key words: Custom Content. Instead use the industry accepted term for your line of work which is: Copywriting. See: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Copywriting.
Spelling, grammar, context and presentation errors are anathema to individuals in your line of work - you've must be able, minimally, to talk the talk.
Were I looking for a copywriter and somehow found your site (in its present form) I'd click-out in a New York second.
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RE: Please critique this beginner's site! - 6/29/2008 2:52:28
Nah - being ex military he'll be using Unnecessary Acronyms (UAs) rather than Long Fancy Words (LFWs).
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RE: Please critique this beginner's site! - 6/29/2008 13:21:48
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being ex military he'll be using Unnecessary Acronyms (UAs) rather than Long Fancy Words (LFWs)
Aviation phonetics are an unequivocal means of communication. 3 examples are:
Tower this is Navy Fox Four Niner Niner Two - Interrogative Whiskey Tango Foxtrot your last. Over.
Navy Fox Four Niner Niner Two Squawking 303 on Guard. Fuel Transer Tango Uniform, say again Tango Uniform. Will attempt Romeo Tango Bravo.
Navy Fox Four Niner Niner Two Squawking 303 on Guard is declaring an emergency. Power is Delta Sierra. Going Loud Handle at Ten Zero Two Zulu.
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RE: Please critique this beginner's site! - 6/29/2008 16:28:37
Ah but that's US Navy speak not acutal aviation stuff!! But surely if you're on Guard you don't need to tell them that you're on Guard - 'cos they'd know? Aren't squawks 4 digit numbers? Or is that just left to us civilians?
But none of that is a TLA - TLAs are lots of fun!
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RE: Please critique this beginner's site! - 7/2/2008 13:15:31
Thanks for the clarification Larry - Not heard the phrase Loud Handle before but in context it's pretty easy to work out - Martin Baker letdown.
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RE: Please critique this beginner's site! - 9/20/2008 6:28:56
You have the same problem with Google that I have, and we both use a master.dwt. So it is either the result of using a master.dwt or something else our sites have in common. See "Google does not see my key words" in the Search Engine Optimization section.
http://www.frontpagewebmaster.com/m-391942/tm.htm
Do a search on google for custom content company and you are nowhere, these words are plentify on your web page. Try doing a search for custom content company customcontentcompany. This seems to be the only way google will find you, as by having your domain name in the search. Of course nobody would search using your domain name, as they do not know you exist.
Once you do the google search for custom content company customcontentcompany. Click on the cache. The words, custom, content and company, should all be highlighted on google’s cache page. They are not. Google does not see those words properly.
Do the same on a Yahoo search - no problem. Yahoo sees all those words
If anyone is using dwt’s could you check to see if you have the same problem? Otherwise it is a problem that this site and mine have in common, that might be due to another reason.
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