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Shamanusavet
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Review and critique web site - 12/21/2001 22:07:24
I am interested in making this site better. Any Ideas/Comments will be welcomed..Thanx, the Shaman
Go to: http://dangelico.home.att.net, In Honor of a Vietnam Veteran
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Mike54
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RE: Review and critique web site - 12/22/2001 8:12:02
Shaman,
Tough subject to build a website around. Start by going for consistancy in navigation, background, font, etc. You have a ton of material laid out as if it were taken from several books and just lumped together. Bring some of the images into the pages to provide a more visual feel (you can still have a photo library section - but just one, you don't need two). Most important take some time to read this post.
http://66.155.126.102/topic.asp?TOPIC_ID=8131
There's a ton of good stuff.
Good Luck
I think, therefore I am, I think.
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Smitty
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RE: Review and critique web site - 12/22/2001 19:08:13
Gotta go with what Mike54 said, it's tough.
I would start with the information on Joseph M. D'Angelico, a little family, home town item. How he got into the service, and maybe timeline more clearly to when he was KIA. Than maybe some of his unit history and what going on now like the dogtag portion.
Get a big piece of paper and layout what you want people to know about him and his service time, when it make sense to you and flows smoothly from one area to the next you'll be done.
Any war is such a waste of life, I lost relatives also, lots of people did, and I applaud you effort to keep the memory alive.
Sincerely
Smitty
John A. Smith sorryiforgot.com hairschool.org
If you have to ask "Who's the man?" Your probaly not him.
Edited by - Smitty on 12/22/2001 19:08:51
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Smitty
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RE: Review and critique web site - 12/30/2001 21:24:37
Shamanusavet,
I don't know if you listen to country music but a song named "Riding with Pvt. Malon" is getting alot af air time. It's about this private's new 1966 corvette and the letter he left in the glove box. If you hear it you'll know what I'm talking about.
Smitty
John A. Smith sorryiforgot.com hairschool.org
If you have to ask "Who's the man?" Your probaly not him.
Edited by - Smitty on 12/31/2001 14:22:06
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Bill Nicol
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RE: Review and critique web site - 12/31/2001 14:31:02
Hi Shaman,
Ya know what? Leave the site just as it is.
I went there and knew in an instant what it was all about. Had no trouble whatsoever in figuring out any navigation.
Sure, you could do some things fancier... but this site gets to you immediately... it did me.
My vote says leave it alone....this site tells a story without the use of any bells and whistles.
But alas, I do have one thing to say... perhaps you could put his birth and death years under the picture.
Great site....brought tears to my eyes.
Bravo.
Support your local piper, buy him a beer and lean him against the wall.
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Smitty
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RE: Review and critique web site - 12/31/2001 19:24:02
Chokes me up every time I hear it.
Smitty
John A. Smith sorryiforgot.com hairschool.org
If you have to ask "Who's the man?" Your probaly not him.
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Shamanusavet
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RE: Review and critique web site - 1/1/2002 23:10:38
Smitty, seems the older I get or as time passed I cry at anything about war..
Bill I was looking at your site. Really enjoyed it. Great navigation...
PS:Happy New Year
May you go in peace....Until we pass in Time again,.... the Shaman
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