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Josh

 

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Site critique please. - 4/24/2002 21:52:07   
Per suggestions from some of you here at Outfront forums and some friends in the web design business, I've totally remodeled my web site, please take a look and let me know what you think and if I can make some improvements!
Thanks!


Josh

 

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RE: Site critique please. - 4/24/2002 21:53:52   
Ok...it might be nice if I gave you the address!

http://bookjoint.com
or
http://www.bookjoint.com

Thanks!


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piquet

 

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RE: Site critique please. - 4/25/2002 12:18:25   
Firstly, congragulations on a well designed layout, it is clean, simple and the information is easy to find.
For me, there are two minuses: I don´t like the repeated graphic next to the menu items, I would either find an appropriate graphic for each item (make them the same size) or just use 3D bullets, you can find loads on the web.
Secondly, I think the text should be justified. On text-heavy sites this gives a more professional look.

Look after #1 and don´t step in #2.

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john40004

 

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RE: Site critique please. - 4/28/2002 10:55:58   
Hi Josh,
Allow me to echo Piquet's comments as to site design - nice job

One suggestion would be to put the navigation bar you have at the bottom of your home page on all other pages. That would eliminate the need for the viewer to have to return to the main page for other links.

All pages loaded fast at 28.8 on 56K modem. Everything was centered with resolution at 800 X 600. All links worked.

John

Age has taught me the value of a hammer as to child-proof caps!

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john40004

 

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RE: Site critique please. - 4/28/2002 10:59:07   
Almost forgot, I noticed your "Special Thanks" to Spooky and the OutFront Forums. A link to the Forums would also be a nice thank-you.
John

Age has taught me the value of a hammer as to child-proof caps!

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Patti

 

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RE: Site critique please. - 4/28/2002 14:53:57   
I agree with piquet. Looks great, easy to navigate. Also agree that the text should not be centered. It was the first thing that I noticed. I think it would look much better justified. Just my opinion.

Looks like you put a lot of work in to the site. Good job!

Patti

 

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Rangler

 

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RE: Site critique please. - 4/28/2002 19:35:45   
Ditto on the text. Justify or position it left.

Also, set your background color. I'm looking at your site on my gf's computer and she has her background set to a God awful dark tan! I can barely read some of your text.

Rangler


Amateurs built Noah's Ark and Professionals built the Titanic! Couldn't get my Black and White TV fixed so threw it away!

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godshall2

 

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RE: Site critique please. - 4/28/2002 22:27:40   
Hi Josh,

Nice start.. Im not exactly sure what that button type image next to the links is. I think it be nice if you had a different image for each link instead of that repetitious image next to every link..

Nice Job...

Troy | www.aplustemplates.com

 

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bnavis

 

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RE: Site critique please. - 5/1/2002 13:33:29   
Looks sharp! Keep it up.

"To start, press any key. Where's the ANY key?" Homer Simpson

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