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rwren
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Virgin Webdesigner - 6/6/2002 17:18:56
Would you all critique my first site please? I am aware of the missing gif's on one page. Also, all of my links are underlined which was not my intention. Thanks for your help!
http://www.harmonybchurch.org/
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tterrifc
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RE: Virgin Webdesigner - 6/6/2002 17:38:04
rwren:
While you have lots and lots of wonderful content, I feel you could use a little help with consistency in your layout and design. Below is a link to one of the great tutorials available on the OutFront web site. There are many more.
http://www.outfront.net/tutorials_02/design/layout.htm
Another area that needs correction is your use of fonts. Your choice of font will not show up on anyone who is perusing your site if they don't have that font installed on their machine. Plus it's a little hard to read, at least on my machine.
Some pages loaded very slowly due to the large sizes of your graphic elements. I also didn't care for jump around navigation -- your page keeps jumping all over.
I hope this helps you. This is just my humble opinion.
Terry Ellis
http://www.protectall.com
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Charles W Davis
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RE: Virgin Webdesigner - 6/7/2002 1:54:48
rwren,
The problem that was mentioned earlier that hte page jumps on mouse over on the navigation, is apparantly caused by the different font size on mouse over. The same size font will solve this problem. Naturally the text below must move with differnt sizes.
When the home page is viewed in Opera 6.0, the expansion of text on mouse over, is restricted to the target link. On mouse over, the link "Our Staff" expands to "Our S"
The links work best in NN 6.0. The entire line expands to accomodate the larger font. The vertical variation still exists to cause the rest of the page to "jump." In NN 6, some of the links return "Page not found." OK in other browsers.
There is a lot of disturbing space on the home page between the last line of text and the bottom of the page.
If you or members of the church has written the text, you should place a copyright statement at the bottom of the pages. Specifically, quote:
(c) Copyright 2002, Harmony Baptist Church. All rights reserved.
Good night!
Enjoy! It's your endeavor!
Chuck, the male ladybug. http://www.anthemwebs.com
http://www.moderncabinetmaking.com
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piquet
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RE: Virgin Webdesigner - 6/7/2002 14:01:00
Good first site. The first page is a little sparse though and I agree with the comment about getting some consistency for all the pages. Keep looking and learning!
Look after #1 and don´t step in #2.
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rwren
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RE: Virgin Webdesigner - 6/7/2002 16:47:10
Thanks for all your input. I have taken many suggestions to heart such as the font change, and the mouse over effect. I totally agree in the navigation theory, I was having people always go back to the home page. I set it up the way I surf not thinking how others might navigate. I havn't made the change yet because I want to learn how to do drop down menus from the top for navigation. If someone can shed light on that, I would much appreciate it.
PS I'm glad everyone liked the coloring book. I am wanting to add many other interactive pages to the childrens area later. Thanks again, Rob
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PBailey
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RE: Virgin Webdesigner - 6/8/2002 2:44:59
Terry,
Thanks for the link!
Paula
So much to learn......
Edited by - PBailey on 06/08/2002 02:45:28
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Wondering where you got the coloring program. That would be perfect for my CCD page! 