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beebizy -> RE: site critque :) (6/20/2002 12:03:45)
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Hi Manda,
Checked out your website, and I would
suggest you change your black font to
white or silver; also the PATCH ENTRY
is UNATTRACTIVE gives a negative message,
change it possibly to a simple animation,
or even a star type entry.
Your original artwork is interesting, but
needs more DEPTH like SHADOWS and/or make
it more like a PERSPECTIVE --
On your second page, you have no MARGINS,
it doesn't look to good to have your
sentences begin right at the line --
indent content at least 5 spaces at
beginning, and 5 spaces at end.
I read some of the other comments, and
don't know what they are talking about
concerning a SPLASH PAGE, maybe I didn't
go far enough into your website, I checked
most pages -- but, you should do more
SHOW & tell -- most people not in the
business have no idea what a SPLASH page
is. Demonstrate some of your services
with examples.
Good luck with your new business.
Beebusy
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