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vision2000
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Your critique please - 7/9/2002 0:17:06
Hi,
Your feedback on please on design, colors, copy and anything else you care to add for:
www.leharman.com and www.leharman.com/mininggold
Thank you,
Herman
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barry
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RE: Your critique please - 7/12/2002 11:22:11
Hi Herman,
I would not read all of the info. I have found that I am very picky about what I take time to read. Although I have a BIG interest in the subject you are offering, I just skimmed it and decided that from the presentation the product is questionable. There was no confidence built.
Hope this helps.
Barry
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Charles W Davis
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RE: Your critique please - 7/13/2002 22:49:15
Herman,
Micah says:quote:
if you' re serious about selling this stuff, avoid jargon
Geeeeeez! I abhor SPAM and totally agree with Micah. In spite of the jargon, the low-lifes will swallow the " stuff" , and buy your product and ultimately will increase the junk in my In Box.
As I read the text on the page, my blood pressure goes up a few notches. I have made it a practice not to disparage the content of site that I critique whether I agree with it or not doesn' t matter, but this one penetrated my good senses.
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vision2000
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RE: Your critique please - 7/14/2002 12:21:13
Thanks everyone for taking the time to add your comments - I agree some of it reads as hype, so I made some small changes.
I' ll be refining the copy and design, based on the ROI in my email marketing campaigns.
Cheers,
Herman
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