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Patty23

 

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site feedback please - 8/12/2002 3:27:26   
Hi,

I am looking for any feedback anyone can give me on my site.
Here is the link

http://www.donnadeloryonline.com

thanks,

Patty
_gail

 

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RE: site feedback please - 8/12/2002 9:48:24   
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ORIGINAL: Patty23

I am looking for any feedback anyone can give me on my site.



Patty, among one of the most beautiful, well-designed sites I' ve laid my eyes on! Congratulations.

There' s only one comment I' d make. The " enter" on the main, top graphic on the first page does not show well, imho. Then you have a statement:

Click Here To Enter If You Cannot See The Image


After not being able to figure out initially how to enter your site, I clicked the link in the text listed above. I later came back and discovered the ENTER on the graphic.

I' d like to suggest that you simply say, Click Here to Enter. Stating " If you cannot see...." suggests that there may be an error on the page. From a psychological standpoint, I just don' t know if that' s the best approach.

Guess what I' m saying is try to help visitors to your site enter it more intuitively..

gail

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_gail

 

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RE: RE: site feedback please - 8/12/2002 17:21:16   
Perfect! Flush righting it wouldn' t hurt (visually) either; ie. line up with right end of image.

Again, just lovely!

gail

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Patty23

 

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RE: site feedback please - 8/12/2002 18:46:22   
Thanks so much for your comments and suggestions. I really appreciate it. I fixed the words so they are aligned at the right of the image.

Thanks again!

Patty

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mytruespirit

 

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RE: site feedback please - 8/22/2002 13:05:20   
Patty,

Outstanding.

I want to be just like you when I grow up. It is amazing. I really like the color and images. The site history is a excellent idea.

Puts my little site to same. How did you learn to be so good and building your webpresence.


http://www.candoassociates.com


mytruespirit

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Charles W Davis

 

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RE: site feedback please - 8/25/2002 23:47:08   
Patty,

The text on the pages are difficult for my eyes to read. When I went to the browser and increased the size of the text, it was better. However, it would be much better, if in a black color or darker shade.

Maybe your target audience is much younger than I by about 50 years, so that makes it alright. I personally would not want to " turn off" any audience. Fan recognition is all important in the industry.


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Enjoy! It' s your endeavor!
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barry

 

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RE: site feedback please - 8/27/2002 16:48:20   
Patty,

I like the site! You did a great job with natural colors!

I agree with Charles, the font is too small. I find that I don' t even try to read fonts smaller than 10pts I like to read 12 personally.

I know that clients require a certain look, but I like the sites that have more links to pages with bigger fonts, than everything on one page that I simply refuse to get a headache trying to read. I never change the font in the browser (lazy)

Great Job!
Barry

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I.M.Learning

 

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RE: site feedback please - 8/28/2002 17:32:33   
Beautiful.

At a quick glance I noticed on the ' Welcome to Donna...' paragraph there is a typo - ' Thanks for much..." I think it' s supposed to be " Thanks so much..." ?


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Seventh

 

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RE: site feedback please - 8/28/2002 20:30:50   
Very nice. I love earthtones. Good job.

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