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Xtreme2000 -> A Come back.. Need input (8/14/2002 17:28:35)

Hi Guys ' N' Gals,

How are things in these woods? Sorry, I had been gone from the forum for a while. Everything was going so fast. But now since I am out of a job ( until I find one). I have time to work on my site finally. All inputs are welcome. Need to find out if it will look good or not. As far as the cotents of the site. It will change. Since my theme now will be Xtreme Network Solutions instead of Xtreme 2000 Network.

http://www.xtreme2000.net <<<--- Please take a poke at it!!!

Thanks before hand.



Gil -> RE: A Come back.. Need input (8/14/2002 18:30:26)

The " Home" link in the nav bar is pointing to a main.html page and returns a 404 error.

Nice clean look - I like it. All except the counter, it screams " amateur"



Luna -> A Come back.. Need input (8/14/2002 19:08:19)

Hi,

Nice colors, just two comments:

1. I would center the logo with the main text.
2. The guest book page doesn’t have navigation at the left. I would add it, if possible.

Otherwise I like it, clean and easy to navigate.

Monica



Xtreme2000 -> RE: A Come back.. Need input (8/14/2002 21:13:25)

I will definately work on those problem.

Especially the counter, it is the web host default. I need to work on that.

Same as the guestbook, but I will find the way to put the link in

Thanks again.. Anymore input are welcome!!!



garry -> RE: A Come back.. Need input (8/15/2002 21:05:14)

Throw in some simple css for your text as you have several differend fonts on different pages, some pages in bold etc.



Rajman1138 -> RE: A Come back.. Need input (8/16/2002 10:43:48)

I got a Horizontal Scoll Bar at 800x600 that cuts part of your logo off.



Xtreme2000 -> RE: A Come back.. Need input (8/17/2002 18:17:50)

Thanks, I will definately look into those problem. Still in the changing how it look phase.. I am working on a different size screen, so I will have to see how it look like in 800x600



Xtreme2000 -> RE: A Come back.. Need input (8/17/2002 18:35:19)

OK, Mostly fixed.. I hope. My table got screw up. But I got it.



t priest -> RE: A Come back.. Need input (8/20/2002 3:28:00)

As for design it is fine -- I would consider making the logo smaller and maybe make the word " network solutions" -- red or green -- something to pop the logo.

The main thing your site needs is a copywriter -- here is a link to a good copywriter http://www.tightcopy.com .

I started to review the site but the site needs more attention than I have at this time--if you can' t pay a copywriter maybe a friend can go over the site.

Hope this helps.

Theresa



Xtreme2000 -> RE: A Come back.. Need input (8/20/2002 15:45:23)

Thanks T Priest,

I will work on it. It will take sometime before the site is fully operational..



Seventh -> RE: A Come back.. Need input (8/28/2002 21:26:25)

I think the logo is ...well, extreme. It takes up a lot of space.

Seventh.



Charles W Davis -> RE: A Come back.. Need input (9/1/2002 0:49:24)

Xtreme2000,

This is what Theresa is referring to:
quote:

Working with computer now a day is just like a fulltime job. You can tell technology are moving faster and faster everyday. With all these fast moving technology in front of you, why not go along for a ride. Get yourself in gear and get with the technology today. Have Technology work with you not against you.


Would be better stated:
quote:

Working with a computer now-a-days is just like a full time job. You can tell technology is moving faster and faster. With this fast moving technology in front of you, why not go along for the ride. Get yourself in gear, and get with it today! Have technology work with you, not against you.


Secondly,
quote:

can helps you get pass these fear and go onto

Should read:
quote:

can help you get past these fears, and go onto


That' s just for starters. You must convince your reader that you can produce a quality product.

Lastly, most readers prefer text left justified rather than centerd.

Good luck!



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